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Jan 24, 2010 16:46

sky wavers with clouds
breeze wafts and lifts hair and hem
words wait while thoughts lapse

haiku

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fearfuloptimist January 25 2010, 05:42:32 UTC
I love "lifts hair and hem." It's like a song to me. Very beautiful and evocative in its simplicity. I get a strong and wonderful visual image in my mind.

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sybillini January 25 2010, 13:35:21 UTC
Thank you!
It is always good to hear when something works and moves someone.

It was one of those moments in the middle of conversation when it was my turn to speak and instead I was completely caught in the sensory experience of being there.

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