Crit post!

[swordwithasmile]

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I am always happy to get constructive criticism. I like having a chance to improve! If there's something off about my portrayal or you disagree with my interpretation, please, please tell me; I'll do my best either to explain my reasoning or fix the problem. This is an unusual situation for him, and so I want to be particularly vigilant in remaining true to canon.

Thank you ♥