Fic: Yen, 1/12

[kalimyre]

Yen

By kalimyre

Pairing: Kensei/Hiro, Adam/Hiro

Rating: Adult

Summary: In which the fairy tale does have a happy ending, but not the one you were expecting.

Notes: Thank you to my fabulous betas: powered_otaku, who fixed all my feudal Japan references, and soulpeddler, who snared my continuity gaps and liked the “whole light bondage thing.”

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Yen - 1. coin and monetary

Comments

[likeahobbit]

OMG ::flaaaaaaaaaaail::

First and foremost, let me say that I LOVE multi-chapter fics. LOVE THEM. So you get a win automatically right there.

Hiro’s first thought was, but where is his shirt? Followed by, and his pants?
That is quite possibly the best line ever.

You characterization is fabulous and your descriptions are awesome.

I can has moar now, plz?

[kalimyre]

Yay, thank you! You win for first comment, go you. *g*

And yeah, Hiro is just made of cuteness, but he pretty much does that on his own without any help from me. Also, more is coming in the next few days; I don't want to spam everyone's flists with the whole thing all at once.

[kalimyre]

Hee! Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I do love Kensei, he's so snarky and cute and full of squishy love under that crisp exterior. And him seducing Hiro, who is all uncertain and stammery and shyly overwhelmed... I may have actually started this just to have an excuse to write that. *g* So, thank you for liking it!

[shaka_chan]

Plz spam my F-List nao, kthanxbai.

<3 Lovely, lovely.

[kalimyre]

Hee! Thank you, and yes, more spammage to follow shortly. Monday, I think, because everyone needs a bit of porn on Mondays. (spoiler!) ^_^

[shaka_chan]

! Porn on Mondays is good. :3 Helps us forget that it is, in fact, Monday.

[guanin]

This is such a wonderful beginning. I love the way you write. The way you're developing this just seems so real and natural and your characterizations are spot-on.

[kalimyre]

Thank you! Especially for the comments about it feeling natural, because this is going to become very AU so I'm glad it feels believable. Yay! ^_^

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

I have to say, I was giggling insanely throughout this entire thing, and probably annoyed everyone within hearing distance.

THAT BEING SAID. This was SO AWESOME. The plot is very interesting and engaging - I was sucked in immediately. The sex at the beginning was hot, and I like how Hiro is so conflicted about his feelings. I LOVE IT! \o/ I can't wait for the next chapter!

[kalimyre]

Yay for giggling! I do adore flustered, conflicted Hiro and Kensei trying to seduce him. *g* Thank you, I'm glad you like it!