You're everything I've ever wanted

[katznhund]

Maker’s breath she was an amazing woman. As hard as he tried, he couldn’t keep her out of his thoughts; the way she walked, the way she wielded a sword, so full of confidence.

And when she bent over, the leather skirt of her armor…

His pulse quickened. Maker forgive me.

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The rose twirled in between her fingers, a sweet,

Comments

[tahara_l]

Depending on your state of mind, you could think it that he either broke up with her and married someone else or sacrificed himself. Neat!

[katznhund]

I was trying to leave it open ended, nice to know it did came across that way. Glad you liked it.

[jenfrommars]

This is...different. The format, I mean. But a actually quite like how each section was short, you really captured the scenes and were able to put a lot behind so few words. I think this is very well done :D

[katznhund]

Thanks :) I was a bit surprised at the format myself, but it just seemed right.

[kalihira]

Sometimes flashes of insight are more effective. I liked the format. It made it more inticing.

<3

[katznhund]

I was hoping the shortness would keep the emotions going forward, create a feeling of urgency.

[promisetruth]

Loved the format and emotions.

Plus, I keep replaying the song over and over again. Such a...almost hypnotic song.

Thanks!

[katznhund]

The link I used for the song is from a free sampler album of his various projects. I don't think you can just download the song, you have the get the whole album. I've gotten a few of his things from bandcamp and the quality is good and no problems with itunes or anything. Glad you liked the song and the fic :)