Fic: Gone

Apr 10, 2010 12:56

 
An answer to the challenge “ love lost.”
Comments are much appreciated. :)

Title: Gone
Author: SignCherie
Rating: E
Pairing: Gorim/fem!Aeducan
Summary: Gorim will never forget his lady...

Just hold me one last time, she says. )

media: fic, character: aeducan

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signcherie April 10 2010, 19:11:18 UTC
Thank you. Gorim broke my Aeducan's heart, you know. I couldn't just leave it alone.

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signcherie April 10 2010, 18:57:52 UTC
Curses!

Should be fixed now. My apologies.

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milia_timmain April 10 2010, 19:14:41 UTC
Oh im all teary-eyed, I love it.

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signcherie April 10 2010, 20:06:34 UTC
Thank you very much!

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amasaglajax April 10 2010, 19:22:19 UTC
Oh, Gorim. ;; I really really love this part: "He is not a man who would abandon his wife and child. Not even for those eyes. Not even for that smile." because it helps soften a little of the blow I felt as a player when f!Aeducan comes across Gorim in Denerim and the bastard doesn't immediately run away with me into the sunset XD It's like, oh, right, she loved him BECAUSE he isn't the kind of man who would ever do that... IDK if that makes any sense? Anyway, beautiful and I love it :)

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signcherie April 10 2010, 20:18:08 UTC
I know exactly what you mean. You find him again and it's like, what? You couldn't even wait for me? You'd rather have *her* than me??? So I tried to get into his head for this piece. I prefer to believe that Gorim is totally heartbroken over me, but couldn't shirk his responsibilities, than to think it was easy for him to move on.

I'm glad you liked it. :)

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seren_bach April 15 2010, 12:05:32 UTC
Wow, I'm totally adopting this as my personal Aeducan canon, if you don't mind. You've made me feel so much better about my PC's heart getting broken. Thank you!

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promisetruth April 10 2010, 19:37:14 UTC
I'm not a big fan of the Aeducan or Brosca Origins...but you still managed to pull at my dwarf-resistant heartstrings.

Nicely done, as always. :)

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signcherie April 10 2010, 20:19:27 UTC
Thank you very much! I confess, I'm an elf at heart, but I think the dwarf origins in this game are really well done. And I'm a sucker for forbidden love.

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promisetruth April 10 2010, 20:42:50 UTC
Who isn't? XD

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sian_shoe April 10 2010, 22:19:17 UTC
not I! it's all about the dwarves.

Nicely done, OP, btw :)

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