Greetings and postings

[armatta]

Hey all! I've been lurking here for some time, trying to get up the nerve to post my fan fic to sit along side of all of the wonderful ones I've read so far! I haven't done much fanfic in my life, but Alistair is so delightful, I couldn't resist! I wanted to write something from Alistair's point of view early on. And I purposely left the heroine

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[thisislove_00]

you may want to put an lj-cut on thsi before our lovely mods get you :) x

[armatta]

Indeed... for some reason my computer is going haywire... trying to fix...

[thisislove_00]

Ok, so now I've gone back and read it, this is really well written :) this line totally made me squee:

"That unknown part of him, passionate and sensuous, had long been locked away inside his heart, banished there by the constant morality tales, admonishments, and ever-present rules." ♥

Write moar!!! x

[cytherae]

yup, that line got me going too.
Can you unlock him for fic numer 2? ;)

Well done and welcome!

[mariposa_verde7]

Hehe I can't get enough of all the fanfiction on here. You should write more, you're rather good at it mate.

[vehlr]

Number one: welcome! Nice to see that we've coaxed another lurker out of hiding ;D
Number two: this is.. beautiful. I love the idea that Alistair feels like he's caught in a trap when he sees this woman. Poor innocent Chantry boy. *grins*
I hope you keep up the writing!

[finding_marie]

Ditto on the delurk!

This is marvelous. I love Duncan and I love that Duncan warned Alistair about his desires.

His inexperience is really highlighted here, and it's great!