Comments | swooping_is_bad: Fanfiction: Martyrs and Thieves

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Fanfiction: Martyrs and Thieves

Nov 22, 2009 13:28

Title: Martyrs and Thieves
Author: Rainfallen
Summary: ( possible end game spoilers in summary )

Comments 7

cjk1701 November 22 2009, 19:39:05 UTC

I read the first chapter last night, and I'm so happy you're updating so quickly. I love it, and I can't wait to find out what's been going with Alistair and how it will turn out.

So basically, want moar now plz ;)

breve November 23 2009, 02:22:53 UTC

My finals are approaching very quickly, so I won't be able to keep quite this pace over the next two weeks or so, but I will do my absolute best. I'm very happy you're enjoying it so far!

finding_marie November 22 2009, 21:04:25 UTC

I love how quickly this is being updated. This is so great. I love that someone is exploring this topic.

It's very sad, but also a very strong piece. A lot of drama in fanfiction comes across as wishy/washy but this is just delicious.

I can't wait to read more.

breve November 23 2009, 02:24:49 UTC

I really intended this to be a little lighter, even funny in places, but I've found that to be nearly impossible at this point in the story. Things will brighten eventually, but the omgdrama is rather necessary at this point. Ah, well. I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far. :D

mariposa_verde7 November 23 2009, 04:01:55 UTC

I just found this on fanfiction.net today. Love it! Please write more, I just can't wait to log onto my e-mail and have a story alert!

breve November 23 2009, 04:08:53 UTC

Heh, I just updated about an hour ago! Unfortunately, my research papers have to get some attention now, but I will keep up as best I can. Thanks so much for the comment -- I'm really glad you like the story! :D

ealainn November 29 2009, 23:02:50 UTC

Not sure if I've mentioned yet that I love this, and how you're telling it.

Haven't yet been able to bring myself to go with the ending that inspired you because I'm too sad at the thought of drunken hobo Alistair (am thinking I could maybe do it with my current char if I go ahead and then decide my PC mage has had a 'oh noes! it woz all a dreem!' moment, waking up in Arl E's Denerim estate, giving her very great clarity on what NOT to do at the upcoming Landsmeet, lol).

Of course this is going to be made of win if it has angsty, scruffy (in my head, anyway...) Alistair, but beyond that it is very, very well written, with great pathos and emotional weight. I particularly like your Cousland, she's very well developed and has very obvious strength.