Perfume

[swoon21]

Title: Perfume
Pairings: Shige/Tegoshi
Rating: R (for non-graphic sex)
A/N: A short somewhat raw AU piece I started in December last year. This is the 3rd one I write instead of finishing my most important work.

Comments

[aniconan_fan1]

Finally, Another one of your fan-fictions. Thank you very much for sharing. I love reading your works. You really seem to grasp NEWS', especially TegoShige's characters and way of thinking. I love how you portray them; how you describe the setting, the mood and what Shige is thinking. I really felt the "setsunai"ness that Shige is feeling here. I especially love stories like that where you can feel the character's longing for the other with a little bit of pang of pain because of their one-sided love (or so Shige thinks). I love how the ending is still open to imagination. Shige's misunderstanding was cleared up but I bet he'll still be a coward to actually tell Tegoshi about what he feels for him. I haven't commented on every story you posted but I read all of them and am always in awe of how you bring out your stories. I hope you'll be prolific with your work but still definitely having fun while doing them this year too. Thank you very much. I really, really enjoyed it.

[swoon21]

Thank you! It really means a lot. I put a lot of my heart into each of my works and knowing someone enjoys them is wonderful.

I wanted to do something raw and with a bit of an open ending. I want to try different genres and Tegoshige allow me to do it, they give me so many ideas. But now I really need to finish my biggest work yet. It's 95% done and I got lots of artwork and even a trailer so please look forward to it)

[aniconan_fan1]

I'm looking forward to your future works.
Your hard-work and effort really shows through your blogs, which I love. I really appreciate all of the time and work you've poured to share these things with us, especially since NEWS stuff are very hard to find. Thank you very much and I hope you continue to enjoy what you're doing (even though sometimes what the NEWS members especially Tegoshi says or do piss you off). A really big thank you!!!

[stereo_ty]

Dayum this was a great read. The setting and his thoughts really created the mood, and everything seems to be written with care. It's so nice how their story flows smoothly through the present interaction between them and to the end. Just, yes <3 I enjoyed this ^^
Ah and this was my favorite part.

"Nevermind." I'm such a coward.

"Is this about the perfume? You ask bluntly and I hold my breath.

"Huh?"

"The perfume. You make this face every time you smell it." I open my mouth and close it. You smile.

[swoon21]

Thanks for commenting, it means a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[akaiyume_vinda]

I loved everything about this! You write so well, the atmosphere was amazing. <3 The little twist with the perfume at the end was so sweet and left me smiling for the longest time.

Thank you so much for sharing your story. :D

[swoon21]

Thanks for the comment. It fuels my drive for the next work.

[swoon21]

Well, better late than never. It's good to know your work has that kind of effect on someone.

Btw, do you have a tumblr account?