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switenana

My Precious One (Part I)

Jun 21, 2011 04:45

Title: My Precious One (Part I)
Pairing : YamaChiiTaro
Author: Luciana
Genre: angsty, mmm, dramatic (whatever)
Summary: “You’re right, it’s my fault.” tears won’t stop. “I should be the one who died, not him.” he said it with bitter smiled.

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do_s_arashilove June 20 2011, 22:00:32 UTC

SPOT!!!

*wanna be the first one*

do_s_arashilove June 20 2011, 22:12:16 UTC

...

I...I...
*needs some in-and out-breathing*
I have to cry, because the first part is so heart-touching....
It's also so special toward me!

These words Yamada told Chinen, as he asked about commit suicide...well..you know what I want to say, deshou~
*sobs so hard*

I..may I can understand Ryutaro...but he didn't even think about Yama-chans thoughts...about his feelings...

Well I'm speechless...
That is such a wonderful and touching storie!!!!!
*hugs you tightly*

switenana June 20 2011, 22:23:49 UTC

uwaa~~~~~~~~
arigatou ne Ya-chan
to say it as wonderfull and touching stori
*hugs you back*

do_s_arashilove June 20 2011, 23:20:22 UTC

Dou-Itashimashite Yu-chan~
*still hugs you*

I feel so much behind the storie, it makes me really happie~~~

I have to say "Arigatou", because you wrote such a great story~

switenana June 20 2011, 23:53:53 UTC

yokatta...>.<
I'm glad you like it ^-^

azukin_notsumi June 21 2011, 00:14:33 UTC

“IT’S YOUR FAULT. YOU THE ONE WHO SHOULD DIE, NOT HIM.” --- this phrase sent me a shiver down my spine... I'm not sure why, but it really touched me... maybe because I was still thinking about the conversation they had at the beginning, that about suicide...
well...

Now go to read next part!! XD

thanks for this!

switenana June 21 2011, 00:19:20 UTC

gomen ne
I don't make it clear >.<

well, enjoy your time

azukin_notsumi June 21 2011, 00:29:13 UTC

No!!
not because it wasn't clear... because it made me think about it.
It's quite sentive issue for me ^^

switenana June 21 2011, 00:30:14 UTC

oooo, ok ^-^
but, I'm glad I didn't make people cry this time
*a bit relieving*

arigatou ne for reading and commenting

jumpfan128 June 21 2011, 00:49:37 UTC

Ana-chan~~
This is so sad :( I got a bad feeling about Yama-chan and.. Chii.. >.<
I need to read the next chapter first! *jump to the next chapter*

switenana June 21 2011, 00:57:53 UTC

eee???
bad feeling???
well, you can read the next
enjoy your time Tama-chan
^-^

yumechan_24 June 21 2011, 02:06:25 UTC

this is the first part but already sad,chi-chan...

“Un,” he nodded and stare Chinen, “being scared of losing you.” Chinen was surprised. Then Yamada looked at the sky again. “Looks like there’s no reason to keep going my life. I would feel guilty for the rest of my life. I will blame myself and I would asked myself about what have I done to you, or why I don’t stop you when you commit to suicide. It’s killing me. Then, it’s better for me to die with you. Because....” he stare at Chinen and holding his hand tightly, “you’re my precious one and the reason I was born. So, I won’t let you die.” i really love this part...yama-chan's word so touching...and i make the other word that romeo never can life without the juliet...XDDDD

“I still can feel it, Ryo-chan. When you suddenly hug and kiss me. You said tadaima when you get home and rush into me, to hugs me. You even said I missed you like hell.” Chinen said and looked at their photo as he step in Yamada room. “I always miss you too, though we’ve met every morning, every day. We spend so ( ... )

switenana June 21 2011, 06:24:54 UTC

yume-channnnnn >.<
un *nod*
yama-chan is romeo, deshou???
it's suit him ^-^

I dunno what do you think for this first part
demo,
arigatou yume-chan
I'm glad you read and love your comment ^-^