Week 12, Title: Dear Friend

[swirlsofblue]

Dear friend,

When I say, ‘Happy Birthday’, I hope you know I mean:
I hope this day is good to you,
I hope this year is good to you,
We should all be celebrating,
Because the world became brighter the day you entered it,
My life became brighter when I met you,
You have helped me more than you know,
I wouldn’t be where I am today without you

Comments

[static_abyss]

That last stanza was really beautiful and so so important.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you liked that last stanza :)

[bleodswean]

*cries* Why, why, why do we so often feel as though we fail those we love and who love us best?

Beautifully rendered, J.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you found it beautiful :).

[alexanderscttb]

I think there is a lot of triumph in this. . . it really is such a failure of ours that we so often fail to express as much when there was still the chance. . .

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you :).

Yeah, I agree, it really is.

[sunouttomorrow]

This is a stunningly beautiful tribute to platonic friendship. There are so many truths to it.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you :)

[nikkiii_brown]

And now I'm crying. "Forgive me." Oh I felt that so much! Beautiful ♥

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you :)