First off, I really like the recognition of the fact that yeah, a bunch of teenage guys probably are going to be uncomfortable around someone like Ryan, whether they actually say so or not.
How awesome is freshman!Chad?
Chad frowned. “Hey. We’re not - you know. Nobody thinks like that here.”
Ryan huffed. “Right. They don’t hate me. They just - don’t like having me around. Because what if, god forbid, I look at them and think the same thoughts they think about girls every single day.” He paused. “I make people uncomfortable.”
Which brings me back to my first point...again, yes. I have a hard time imagining Ryan, however socially awkward he may be and however good he is at hiding it, is oblivious to that. Though it's sweet that Chad is.
And yet...it's also realistic that, however okay Chad is with Ryan's being gay in the abstract, he's a little weirded out to learn that Ryan wants him in more than a joking sort of way.
Just thinking that about Ryan made him feel sick and miserable and guilty.Well, good. Just because it's a
( ... )
I really love that you made Jason the understanding one. Unfortunately because Disney made him the stupid character who doesn't catch on to what's going on around him, fan fiction authors tend to do the same and no one thinks to play with his character. I think this may be my favorite Chyan fic to date. Great job!
Comments 29
Amazingly well-written. The characterization was great and fdhfdjksalh... It was smutty, but not overwhelmingly. ♥ Great job~
~Amunet 8D
Reply
How awesome is freshman!Chad?
Chad frowned. “Hey. We’re not - you know. Nobody thinks like that here.”
Ryan huffed. “Right. They don’t hate me. They just - don’t like having me around. Because what if, god forbid, I look at them and think the same thoughts they think about girls every single day.” He paused. “I make people uncomfortable.”
Which brings me back to my first point...again, yes. I have a hard time imagining Ryan, however socially awkward he may be and however good he is at hiding it, is oblivious to that. Though it's sweet that Chad is.
And yet...it's also realistic that, however okay Chad is with Ryan's being gay in the abstract, he's a little weirded out to learn that Ryan wants him in more than a joking sort of way.
Just thinking that about Ryan made him feel sick and miserable and guilty.Well, good. Just because it's a ( ... )
Reply
I don't think I could leave a review more thorough than few's, so:
Ditto to all above. XD
Reply
Reply
Reply
I'm still amazed at finding so many non-preteen-girls who love HSM. But then, I suppose it makes sense. Pretty boys are for all ages. :-D
Reply
Leave a comment