Protect you for Always Chapter 2

[swindleslog]

Title: Protect You For Always Chapter 2 - Sweet wings, pretty wings
Characters: Skyfire/Skywarp, Skyfire/Starscream
Description: Skywarp has a nasty crash and finds himself heavily damaged in the middle of nowhere. Skyfire comes to his rescue, if you call being tied up rescued. Skywarp is carefully cared for and repaired by a very gentle giant, but

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[spacehussy]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh SKYFIRE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

D:

Okay now that I've gotten that out of the way, maybe I can say something useful about how intensely creepy and awesome this was <333 I think the thing that stands out to me most, especially with the first half before Skyfire gets back, is that you really show us everything. You don't gloss over Skywarp's thoughts and actions and make it go by quickly, you show us every step. With a story like this, it really ups the tension level. We are right there with him going "oh god but what if Skyfire gets back before he finishes? shit this isn't going to work, oh fuck!" the entire time.

Ffffff - of course Skyfire gets back as Skywarp gets to the cave mouth, but it still made my heart hurt. His pettings and inspections and soothing-talk just make my fucking skin crawl. *shudders; kinda loves it* One of my favorite parts is totally when Skywarp realizes who he is while Skyfire is essentially baring his heart dkjfdhgjha.

I'll admit I got a bit of a dirty thrill from Skyfire molesting him in a semi-sexy way, somehow it's less disturbing than Skyfire trying to comfort him. Licking his thruster guh. <3 I love this line:

The shuttle barely managed to avoid getting the full heat of jet engine propulsion going off in his mouth.

*glee* and okay, one more favorite:

His sensors didn't need fixing. They were just fine where they were, he just needed certain somebody's to stop pawing at them and comparing them to Starscream’s.

I can't even explain why I love that one! <3333 Guh, okay. Stopping now, but I can't wait to see what happens next.

[swindleslog]

I almost cut a lot of that before I let you read it and you liked it. I thought I was dwadling, but no, NO, I was creating tension!

And if it helps your heart, look at it this way- which is worse, not quite getting there before getting dragged back, or getting outside, falling down many times, getting even more damaged, and then, inevitably, getting found and most likely treated even more suffocatingly then before after actually gaining your freedom?

The bald faced molesting is slightly less disturbing because at least Skyfire's up front about it. Any little touch, and having Starscrea/Skywarp so depended, so helpless in his arms is an enormous thrill for him. Starscream is his, and he needs him, and he can touch him and pet him however he wants, talk to him however he likes and Starscream can do nothing to stop it. I find that infinitely more perverse and disturbing than the emotional breakdown molesting.