Rattlesnake Smile ~ David/Chris

[sweptawaybayou]

Rattlesnake Smile

by Snow

for killerweasel's b~day and the slashthedrabble 'forgive' challenge.

David/Chris
RPS
NC/17
they're not mine
500 words
more than a passing nod to knotted_rose's Sugarverse.

Comments

[killerweasel]

This was great.

Really liked it. :D

[sweptawaybayou]

yay!!

i'm so glad you liked this. thank you so much for sending me the song. again.

:D

*twirls you*

[hurry_sundown]

It kind of worries me that I have a kink for your DB/CK, considering how fucked up they are. It worries me not at all that I have a kink for your writing in general.

*smooch*

[sweptawaybayou]

hee! yes. they are, aren't they? my own dysfunctional bois that live in my head.

:D

Thank you for reading, babe.

xoxo

[spikendru]

May I second that? I totally agree with Sundown - your DB/CK just hits all my kinks! I love how needy, yet resistive, they both are. They can't stay away from each other, yet neither one wants to be seen as the one who gave in first. So, instead of having all evening to be together, Dave will put off going and Chris will sit there getting more and more pissed, and when David finally shows up, they have about a half hour of hot, sweaty time together before he starts feeling guilty and has to go, and that makes Chris even more pissed off and he swears he'll never go through this again, but the next time he gets a chance, he always does.

*whew* That came out really long winded, didn't it?

In any event, thank you for this. I just love your fucked up bois!

[sweptawaybayou]

omg!

*squishes you tight*

lovely, lovely comment. Thank you. That is *them* to a T. hee! you make me want to write more of teh!bois.

Thank you!

[poisontaster]

This is what I love most about how you write them; their utter inability to live without each other, to completely disengage. When the relationship is as mixed with hate, with resentment of the other person for having this POWER over them, as it is with love. Yess... *purrs*

[sweptawaybayou]

yiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis. so very fucked up. and try as i might, i can't seem to let them alone. they keep sneaking up on me at the most inopportune moments.

heh.

thank you muchly.

*smoochsmooch*

[setje]

is in a very happy place now .. *purrrrsssssmilespurrrssss*

they are so 'not' over !

[sweptawaybayou]

wheeee!

*squishes you tight*

oh no, never over. never never. ever.

:D

*luffs*

[technosage]

I do so love the fucked-up codependence of how you write them. They hurt each other and can't stop, but they can't stop loving/having/needing either. It's gorgeous.

[sweptawaybayou]

thank you! and they are, aren't they? so fucked. in so many ways.

:D

glad you liked it.