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[sweettart1823]

Title: Just to Get Away
Author: Sweettart1823
Claim: Mia Dearden
Characters/Pairing: Mia Dearden/Hal Jordan
Rating: NC-17? Nothing explicit just topless Mia bad language, and talked about sexual activity.
Prompt: Vacation
Summary: Mia wanted to get away and be alone, well not totally alone.
Disclaimer: I don't own them.
Author's Notes/Warnings:

Comments

[levy]

OMFuckingGOD I love you. O O

first of all, and you know that, I love how you write Mia. That something you put in her voice that is just. Too much love.

BUT... the one tha surprised me the most here is Hal because he is so human, and real, and omg I want more of this Hal Jordan in my canon. I love how you fleshed out the age gap between through their dialogue and interaction and how both of them, for different reasons, indulge in this secretiveness. I loved Mia finding her hot and telling him.

And Hal can't deny it, he is totally gay for Ollie, LOL!

Awesome... and a supercute present, thank you so much!! ^ ^

[sweettart1823]

Of course everything you like about Hal could just be because I'm bad at writing him xD Just a thought. But this came out with a very cuddly Hal, so in my mind he was just in a very cuddly mood, I guess.

xD He can't, they're to gay for each other. *nods*

You are very welcome :D I'm happy you like it.

[levy]

mwahhaha as far as I'm concerned, YOU >>>>>>>> Johns in writing Hal, baby! X°D

No, I seriously mean it!! XDDD thanks again!

[sweettart1823]

xD

Really it was no problem it was fun ;]