[fic]The Bloody Countess

Jan 06, 2009 21:33



Title: The Blood Countess

Author:Sweetmagnae

Pairings: SuperJunior/Shinee

Chapter: 1/?

Rating:PG13 (it might give u nightmares)

Summary: SuJu and Shinee are spending their vacation in the legendary “Castle Csejthe” which was ounce a finishing school for girls run by the blood-thirsty 17th century Countess Elizabeth Bathory,during their stay they learned the dark secrets behind the twisted witch and her horrifying history and realize they’re in for a spooky adventure.

Author’s note: its been a looooong time since I’ve been in LJ,sorry but I was really busy about skool n everything,this was inspired by that ghost story about this countess and just thought I’de try doing a horror series. If u want to avoid having nightmares I suggest not reading this and I hope u’ll enjoy this ^^

WARNING: Elizabeth Bathory and Castle Csejthe is a true story,which means it existed before so please respect the story and don’t think too much about it. You can find more information in Google.com. There is no need to do any ritual or whatever you think you need to do before reading the story.

Chapter 1

Arrival

“off all places it has to be here” Heechul whined as the others stepped down from the van. Apparently some stranger convinced Lee Soo-man to let Super Junior and Shinee (DBSK was busy at the time) to spend their vacation at a place called “Castle Csejthe” which is located in central Romania , deep in the Carpathian mountains.Soon after both groups finished loading their luggage of  the van they began to walked to the place they were staying and as soon as they arrived…

“well that looks like some old castle” Kangin commented.

“well it has it’s own kind of charm I supposed”Leeteuk said as he surveyed the outside of the ancient ,creepy mansion.

The mansion was a big brick wall castle-like building with pointy roofs. At the back was a tall tower and it looked like you had to find a secret passage or something to be able to reach the top.With the dark atmosphere covering it, it looks almost like a a scene in a horror movie and you can feel the chill it sends down your body.

Sure enough the sight of the spooky-looking tower send chills down the boys spine.

“that’s it im outta here” Jonghyun broke the silence and was beginning to walk away when Key stopped him. “you cant leave,we’ve already been this far and besides,our plane home is next week” Jonghyun looked at him with whiny eyes and said “and you expect us to stay in that creepy mansion?forget it man,thers noway im staying in that kind of place” “Key’s right Jonggy,we have no choice but to stay here until next week” Onew said as Key dragged Jonghyun back to the group. “well,lets check it out then” Yesung took out the keys to the mansion and unlocked the frontdoor.

They entered the house into the lobby .The room was neglected to say the least. The room had quite a lot of furniture, old as it was. Heechul ran a finger across the antique tables only to have it coated in a layer of dust. On the floor was a very large rug with a pattern that showed it to be very old. It covered most of the wooden floor giving the impression that it was there to hide something. The gang dismissed that feeling as simple paranoia and continued to climb the parlour staircase before them; they stepped carefully as it seemed that it could collapse at any moment.

Once they were upstairs they all went to their bedrooms of choice. All of them contained minimal furniture. Most of them consisted of merely a four poster bed and a wardrobe. Each of them dumped their suitcases in these rooms and went back downstairs to the main living room. It was night and fortunately they had found a stock of wood round the back of the house earlier in the day (as it was impossible to gather any wood now due to the terrible storm raging outside), allowing them to light a fire in the ornamental fire place.

“anyway,Ryeowook I do recall about you telling us thers a story behind this castle and a woman who owns it?” Yesung asked and everyone turned to looked at Ryeowook who blushed slightly when he suddenly becomes the center of the attention.

“well heres how story goes…this mansion was ounce a finishing school for girls in the seventeenth century,the place was runned by Countess Elizabeth Bathory who was the one who opened Geruge Plantation herself. Girls were sent here to learn etiquette but not one came back.” Everyone was soon on the edge of their seats waiting for Ryeowook to continue. “what happened to these girls were terrifying,they were tortured,killed and then Elizabeth had their blood drained out of their bodies so she could bath in them for she believed that young girls blood will make youth last forever” everyone gasps at the statement but urge him to continue.”the authorities soon found out what was happening at the plantation,they had her walled up in her own tower”he pointed to the tower behind the mansion and everyone turned to look then turned back as Ryeowook continued “and she died 4 years later but!!” everyone jumped on their and Ryeowook said in a low whisper. “heres the hooker,before Elizabeth died she said she will be back one day” there was silence when a lighting struck,Everyone jumped and some screamed(Heechul’s the loudest) there was silence when Minho asked “did this really happen?” Ryeowook laughed and said “ofcourse it’s a fake,what?do you think this kind of person existed?” Minho and the others sighed in relieve but still had an uneasy feeling about story especially the tower.Taemin yawned and said in a sleepishly voice “lets go to bed hyungs its late already,Minho hyung would you care to join me?” Everyone wolf-whistled and Minho blush but he knew that there was no way Taemin would sleep alone after hearing that ghost story,so everyone scattered to their bedrooms,leaving Ryeowook,Yesung and Heechul in the room. “so,Ryeowook is that story really a fake or you just don’t want to scare the others?” Yesung looked at Ryeowook unsure but Ryeowook nodded “actually yes hyung,the story is true but I didn’t want to scare the others so I told them it was a fake” Heechul nodded “yeah well,that was good of you to do that,well then im off for my beauty sleep,chao!” Heechul walked with pride to his bedroom upstairs leaving Yesung and Ryeowook together.

“so.. you ok?” “yeah im fine…just a little scared” Yesung smiled and lean in to kiss Ryeowook’s forehead and said “its ok,I’ll protect you I’ll wont let that witch come after you” Ryeowook smiled and kissed Yesung who kissed back.They broke apart after a minuit and Yesung smirked.

“any plans for tonight?” Ryeowook grinned and said “maybe,if your willing” they both kissed before going upstairs to their shared bedroom and locked the door,leaving an unaware presence in the room that was listening to their conversation the whole time.

Even though everyone was sleeping peacefully because they were sure nothing will happen to them through the night(since some of them still thought the story wasn’t true) they weren’t aware of the chille presence,that was watching them,waiting for a chance to strike.

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chapter one done!as i said,im really sorry for not being in LJ for a looooong time,ever since shcool started i didn't have the time,oh as for death note,i cant finish it becuase it has a long hiatus so just forget about that one,and as for the requests im still working on it so pls wait..and um...i hope you'll enjoy this one and im sure i will finish this series.thx 4 reading and comments plz??>< oh and...Elizabeth thinggy is real and castle too,try looking her up in google

author:sweetmagnae

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