FIC: DEATH NOTE (SUPER JUNIOR VERSION)

Oct 23, 2008 21:40



Title: DEATH NOTE (SUPER JUNIOR VERSION)

Author: sweetmagnae

Characters: Superjunior

Pairings:SiHan,SiHanChul,Hanchul,KiEunHae,ZhouRy,KyuMin,YehWook,

KangTeuk and Shindong(I dunno who to pair him up with)okay everyone in sj

Chapter: 1/?

Genre:funny,angst(maybe),fantasy

Summary:Siwon cant stand the the criminal world,but he finds the notebook he believes is the key to his success of  changing the world.

Author’s notes:I dunno what im thinking but I really wanted to write this,Death Note is one of my favourite movies and I was taking a shower when this came into mind lol,anyway I just wanna tell you guys that this story will not be the same as the original movie, as the title says this is a super junior version,means I changed the story from the original except the characters and yes,the famous DEATH NOTE book but I actually added a few (ok a lot)more characters. My third fanfic but my first ah how do you call it?chapter fanfic?whateva…I hope you enjoy it^^

Siwon was a man of justice,well not exactly yet but he always dream to be like his father,who is the chief police of the national security police force of Seoul. Anyway,Siwon is a college student at Seoul university studying law,hes in his 4th year and has lately been in a bad mood,of course he had to be in a bad mood who could blame him?it was the world outside that has ben bothering him,thw world full of criminal minds filling the streets ,the air….nothing but bad news like robbery or murder has been on news lately and Siwon was sick of  it. He really wanted to change the cruel world out there but he just didn’t know how.

“there has been another murder today at the national park,the victim is young school girl who was on her way home when she was attacked ….”Siwon stood motionless,watching the news on TV with dismay in his eyes “what is it that that bastard wants?why does he have to murder an innocent school girl?school girl?!so young!” Siwon said to himself , he really didn’t understand criminals. Why do they have to take innocent lives away?what good will it do them?Siwon just sat there,drinking his coffee and continue listening to the news.

“police believe that the murderer is the same person who has cause the same murders in the past few weeks , police are trying to identify who the murderer is and hope to find clues in the evidence they find…..chief police Choi Seunghwan said that police are investigating the scene seriously in hope of able to track down the killer….” “I’ve always thought your father looks good on TV” Siwon turn to face his mother who just entered the living room “you know what mom,one day I’m going to be like him. I’m going to be as good as him and put all those criminals in to jail” he slammed his fist on the table as he said the word “criminals”. “I’m so proud of you and your father,now I have two men that I can use as my bodyguards” she chuckled. Siwon grinned and hugged his mother.

“you know Siwon,your probably  better off as a model than a cop with your perfect chocolate abs and all” Siwon looked at his friend and said “It’s not my fault I have a perfect body, besides why don’t you be a model yourself Yesung?you have the good looks” Yesung just chuckled back. It was a fine day and Siwon was at university,it was lunchtime so he sat down with his friends who are: Yesung,Ryeowook,Zhoumi,Henry,Kyuhyun,Sungmin,Shindong and Hangeng,Siwon’s boyfriend. They were all eating and talking about random such studies,girls(?),homework just random stuff,but today the subject is different.

“I feel sorry for the girl’s parents,I heard she was an only child” Ryeowook said in sympathetic voice while stroking Yesung’s hair.

“yeah,shes only a school girl too I wonder why they kill her for” Sungmin said.

“now im too afraid to go home,I always to go home alone and since my home is far it always get dark by the time I reach my neighborhood.” Henry squealed in fear so Zhoumi wrapped his arms his lover’s neck. “don’t worry baby,I wont let anything happen to you besides I have car,I could send you home” Kyuhyun then turned to Zhoumi with wide eyes. “you have a car?” Zhoumi replied “yep,the brand new red jaguar my dad bought me yesterday” Everybody ohed.

“oh,so you’re the one who owns that red plate outside” shindong said pointing to the shiny red car outside and a group of girls were surrounding it.

“well dude,you better go take care of those chicks,you don’t how girls in this university can go crazy over a red jaguar saying it turns on their minds” Yesung said and Sungmin just rolled his eyes.

“what the hell?-I’ll be back” Zhoumi stood up but he saw Henry glaring at him.

“don’t worry babe,no matter how hot they are your still the only guy for me” with that statement Henry calmed down but still said “you better telling the truth” Zhoumi laughed before going out to his car and talking to the group of girls with his im-so-hot pose.The girls just giggled.

“anyway,Siwon what is your dad going to do with this case?its the fifth murder  of two weeks” Hangeng said,ignoring the scene outside.

“well,my dad said that he thinks the murderer is a drug dealer because they found a few packs of heroine at crime scene”  Siwon replied.

Ryeowook gasps “a drug dealer?that makes it even scarier!” he quickly grasp Yesung’s arm. “I know but dad and his investigation team are trying their best to track down the killer. I really want to help them,so I can prove to everyone how loyal I am to the law and put the bastard imprison!” Siwon said in proud voice.

“ oh Siwon,you’re the bravest person I’ve ever met” Hangeng said as wrapped his arms around his boyfriend’s neck. The others just rolled their eyes.

It was raining that afternoon and Siwon was walking home from university. It was starting to get dark and his mother was worried so she phoned her son but Siwon said he was fine and that he’ll be home soon. As he was walking by he saw a bar at the side of the road,realizing how thirsty and tired he was he decided to go inside and have a drink.

He stepped into the warm bar,there were a lot people mostly couples enjoying their time, talking with their friends and having a few drinks. Siwon went to sit at the bar,a waiter approached him and asked for his order.

“just a cup of beer thanks” the waiter went of to prepare his drink as Siwon looked at his surroundings. The walls were red but all the seats were purple,a band was playing on the stage but only a few people were watching. When he got his drink he gulped down half a glass before he spotted a group of men sitting in a corner. One of them was holding a cigarette in one hand while the other hold a knife,he was speaking to a boy who looked really frightened when the knife comes close to him, curious Siwon went over to listen.

“now,if don’t want to die promise me you’ll never do it again” the man with the knife said as he inhaled his cigarette and blew smoke on the boy’s face.He shivred.

“y-yes s-sir,I wont d-do it ever a-again” the boy stuttered frightendly,the men just laughed.

“you better be careful of what you promise ‘cuz if you break it,I’ll slth your trought” the man said as he softly trace the edge of his knife on the boy’s neck. He shivered again and when the man dismissed him,he dash out of the bar.

Siwon didn’t like how the man and his friends treated the boy so he went over and said “why did you treat him like that?” the three men looked up at him,surprised that someone dare talk to them like that.

“who the hell are you and what are you talking about?” the man with the knife glared at him ,but Siwon wasn’t scared. “it doesn’t matter who I am,what matters is why did you talk to the young boy like that” Siwon said his fist clenching.

The man just laughed then his two friends started laughing too,he then looked up at Siwon again and said “I don’t think that’s any of your business”

Siwon just stood there. He couldn’t find the right words but he was still angry so he just glared at the men in front of him.

“look” the man said then he motioned Siwon to sit down and when he did,the man continued “that boy works for me,he delivers my drugs to V.I.P customers and my men here” he pointed to the two men sitting at both side “caught him selling to his friends,so I had him brought here to have a little chat of what he did and I forgave him since hes a new worker for me” the man then pointed his knife at Siwon “but if he does it again…he’ll be seeing this knife cut through hi trought” he then traced the knife along Siwon’s neck,sendind shivers down his spine. The man laughed at his reaction then said “your not going to tell this to anyone are you” Siwon glared at him but answered “no I won’t sir” the man smirked then said “you better not or I’ll have my men tear you up to pieces” he then hardened his knife on Siwon’s neck as if he was going to strike him there and then. Siwon nodded and tha man smiled an evil smile “good,now get out of here” at that Siwon stood and ran out of the bar (not forgetting to pay for his drink) he ran into the cold rain and started shouting “WHAT THE HELL?I HATE THOSE CRIMINALS I HATE THIS CRUEL WORLD” passer-bys looked at him as though he was some kind of a lunatic but Siwon didn’t care,he then start running again , kicking hard at a small trash can during the process. He ran and ran until he finally stop to gasp for air,after a few inhalations he started walking again but suddenly stopped at his tracks as something caught his eye.

A black notebook was lying on the ground,now usually people wont bother to pick up a notebook but the reason why this one caught Siwon’s attention is because the rain didn’t touch the book,as though it some kind of protection surrounding it to keep it from getting wet. Siwon pick up the book and flipped it open,nothing wasn’t written inside only a few rules were printed in white with a strange font. trange,why would a note book have rules? Siwon thought . He closed the note book but then the cover caught his interest. Right there in big clear white letters was:

DEATH NOTE

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Oh my….i dunno what im thinking?i hope you enjoyed it though and the next chapter might not be updated soon since I have school but I’ll try to update as soon as I can. Oh and can somebody tell me the rules of the deathnote?i need for the next chapter

Comments are appreciated ^^

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