Re: Part 2 continued!--stupid character limitsweetjamieleeFebruary 20 2012, 17:30:45 UTC
YOU. You WROTE!!! And I am just so excited and pleased and I am doing twirls on my couch the best I can (hint: not very well). This is the best President's Day present EVER!
So part the 1st: Okay, LOVE Kalinda with Grace, being awkward and Kalinda-ish and awesome all at the same time. I think you got into the mind of a teenager pretty damn well, and specifically got in the mind of Miss Blurts-a-Lot herself very well. Kalinda would totally, TOTALLY be the cool, bad-ass step-mom, I don't even care. LOL at her head-banging the second Grace is out of sight.
And part the 2nd: KALICIA. God, how badly do I *want* this for them? Kalinda's bring her meals in bed! They are SNUGGLING. (Bonus LOL for the Eli/David Lee OTP shout-out.) Everybody's so HAPPY (Kalinda begrudgingly so, but WHATEVER, I think it might take her awhile to really believe she can do this, and deserves it). It gives my heart *feeeeeelings*.
In conclusion, I hereby designate K/A happy family future fic the world's best genre, and want you to write ALL THE THINGS. Thank you for sharing this!!
Re: Part 2 continued!--stupid character limitmightbefoundFebruary 21 2012, 00:39:12 UTC
Aw, now you're just making me blush! I'm glad you liked it. The prompt caught my fancy and wouldn't let go until I wrote. :) Although, ew, I'm reading it in the light of day (and with some sleep under my belt), and holycrap the tense shifts are HORRENDOUS. I...usually edit much better than this. Facepalm.
And I'm glad Grace worked for you! I couldn't decide whether to have her be totally innocent of what she was doing to Kalinda or a little devil, but ultimately I decided that the former was both more in character and made for a better payoff. So I'm glad she wasn't too OOC!
Kalinda tries so hard not to be happy, but sometimes she just can't help herself. :) I REALLY WANT KALINDA TO ADOPT A DOG, OKAY. A SCRUFFY UGLY MUTT WITH ONE EAR ALL TATTERED FROM FIGHTING. ALICIA WILL TAKE ONE LOOK AT IT, LAUGH HER ASS OFF, AND THEN FALL IN LOVE. KALINDA WILL BE PLEASED...AND VAGUELY JEALOUS.
So part the 1st: Okay, LOVE Kalinda with Grace, being awkward and Kalinda-ish and awesome all at the same time. I think you got into the mind of a teenager pretty damn well, and specifically got in the mind of Miss Blurts-a-Lot herself very well. Kalinda would totally, TOTALLY be the cool, bad-ass step-mom, I don't even care. LOL at her head-banging the second Grace is out of sight.
And part the 2nd: KALICIA. God, how badly do I *want* this for them? Kalinda's bring her meals in bed! They are SNUGGLING. (Bonus LOL for the Eli/David Lee OTP shout-out.) Everybody's so HAPPY (Kalinda begrudgingly so, but WHATEVER, I think it might take her awhile to really believe she can do this, and deserves it). It gives my heart *feeeeeelings*.
In conclusion, I hereby designate K/A happy family future fic the world's best genre, and want you to write ALL THE THINGS. Thank you for sharing this!!
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And I'm glad Grace worked for you! I couldn't decide whether to have her be totally innocent of what she was doing to Kalinda or a little devil, but ultimately I decided that the former was both more in character and made for a better payoff. So I'm glad she wasn't too OOC!
Kalinda tries so hard not to be happy, but sometimes she just can't help herself. :) I REALLY WANT KALINDA TO ADOPT A DOG, OKAY. A SCRUFFY UGLY MUTT WITH ONE EAR ALL TATTERED FROM FIGHTING. ALICIA WILL TAKE ONE LOOK AT IT, LAUGH HER ASS OFF, AND THEN FALL IN LOVE. KALINDA WILL BE PLEASED...AND VAGUELY JEALOUS.
Glad you liked it all! :)
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