The "Everything Changes" 2014 TGW Ficathon

Jul 16, 2014 11:36


The "Everything Changes" 2014 TGW Ficathon has come to a close! Thank you to all who participated. This post will remain unlocked so that readers may continue to comment on posted fics. Also feel free to post links to belatedly filled prompts. Hope to see you next year!


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anonymous July 20 2014, 00:18:11 UTC
Alicia always thought that it was the clothes. The leather jackets, the short skirts, the boots. But when she starts to take them off, slowly, with those deep black eyes never moving away from her own, she realizes that she has been wrong all this time.

Kalinda is naked in front of her, with an amused expression on her face. Alicia would have thought that without the help of those extravagant heels, she would look smaller. But here she is, bigger that life. Unfazed, it seems, by Alicia's trembling hands and pounding heart. Like she knew all along that they would end like this. Like she has been preparing for this moment. Like a warrior for the battle. Expecting to be wounded.

Alicia knows it. So she thought the clothes would be the key, that once out of the way, Kalinda would show herself.

"Kalinda", she whispers, because Alicia is the only one really naked here and she can't barely breath and she needs... She needs her to...

And it happens right then. Kalinda lifts one hand to her ponytail and let's her hair fall free, framing her face, covering her shoulders. She sighs.

Alicia exhales. Her amor is gone and Kalinda is right there.

Z

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anonymous July 20 2014, 00:36:29 UTC
Sorry for the errors, damn autocorrect. Also, english is not my first language. So, yeah. Sorry again.

Z

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joroxxx July 20 2014, 01:16:47 UTC
Thank you so much - best birthday gift ever!!!!

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anonymous July 20 2014, 01:39:18 UTC
You are welcome :-)

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demoka July 20 2014, 06:41:23 UTC
Brilliant! Yes, until Kalinda let's down her hair (literally & figuratively) we can't be sure she's comfortable with & trusts Alicia! Thanks for sharing

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teamsharma July 20 2014, 10:44:55 UTC
That was beautiful. Thank you!

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hotladykisses July 20 2014, 20:18:22 UTC
“Alicia is the only one really naked here”: so true. But Alicia baby, K is never really naked, unless she lets her hair down - and she wouldn’t do it for anyone but you…

Thank you for tackling the ultimate fantasy, that was hot ^^

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sweetjamielee July 21 2014, 02:32:13 UTC
I will never ever ever get tired of Kalinda-taking-her-hair-down-for-Alicia fic. It automatically turns me to goo. So thank you for that. I thought your English was lovely -- sweet and poignant fic! Thank you so much!

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zinnia_rose July 21 2014, 05:27:04 UTC
Oh, the trust and vulnerability here are gorgeous. I would never have guessed that English wasn't your first language.

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schwarmerei1 July 23 2014, 22:09:11 UTC
Z, I'm such a patsy for Kalinda-lets-her-hair-down fic! Thank you thank you! I also wouldn't have guessed English wasn't your first language. I mean that genuinely -- it reads as "natural", not just "correct".

I hope you write some more fic!

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tamoline July 27 2014, 15:32:33 UTC
I love the economy of storytelling here. Alicia's vulnerability comes across so vividly.

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