FIC: anywhere except the mouth (Supernatural)

[sweetestdrain]

I just stumbled across this bit of half-written Wincest and decided to shine it up a tad and post it instead of doing my homework. (The Word file was named, inexplicably, "dwb1". I couldn't figure out what that stood for, despite the fact that I obviously named it. Dumb White Boys, maybe? I really don't recall

Comments

[gelasius]

Ahhh, mmmm.

Glad you decided to bring this out. It's just what I needed tonight. :)

[sweetestdrain]

Hee, happy to oblige. Glad you liked it!

[scatterheart]

That was wonderful, I think you've got their voices and dynamics down really well - the way Dean would do everything for Sam, and Sam sort of keeping himself from pushing too far.

Sammy Jr.
That made me cringe a bit, but it's totally something Dean would say. :))

[sweetestdrain]

I'm glad the characterization worked for you; that's really what I'm trying to get a handle on, so it's good to hear!

That made me cringe a bit

Heh, ME TOO. But I figured if it made even the writer cringe with the utter tacky guy-ness of it, that maybe it really was something Dean would say. Sigh. Oh, Dean.

Thanks!

[killabeez]

Oh, yes. You chose wisely, deciding to polish this up and share it with us. I love how very much boys they are in this, if that makes sense. No rose petals and vanilla body oil. *g* Messy and sweaty and intimate and too close for comfort. Sounds like Dean, too. Yum, thank you!

[sweetestdrain]

Ooh, yes, I'm really glad the boys-ness of it comes through. Thinking of their more brotherly, antagonistic interaction on the show and whether I could make that translate into intimacy/slash was actually my inspiration for the snippet. So, yeah, no rose petals and vanilla body oil here. *g*

Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked it.

[fledge]

Was reading comments (dragons are curious, like cats) and So, yeah, no rose petals and vanilla body oil here. *g* - LMAO I should hope not, yeep! I'd run a mile from a fic like that XD Unless it was done as a deliberate 'weird shit going down in Spooksville' kind of plot.

No, the brothers are definitely of the sweaty, bruising, wet mouthed and thrusting loins kind of sex. And the angst, well, you HAVE to have angst, it's incest, and to pretend they wouldn't give a second thought about that is just lack of realism.

I'm glad this fandom snagged us both ;)

[beatperfume]

Oh my god, you're writing Supernatural and I love you! You've got such a good handle on these characters -- they're such boys, and they're such Winchesters it breaks my heart.

Oh please write more in this fandom! *love*

[sweetestdrain]

Oh, no worries, I definitely plan on writing more in SPN fandom. It's a brain-eater, this show.

Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[sockkpuppett]

YAY PORN!!

Yay! Good porn!!

Yay!

[sweetestdrain]

Hee, I had not porned in over a year. It was time. And, well, Sam. And Dean. *flail*

Glad you liked it!