An_Ode_To_The_Landlubbers

[sweetdelirium]

I could drown at any moment

Comments

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[professorbooty]

Just to let you know, I'm a few days behind, but bookmarking these to read later.

[antiquehighheel]

This is good stuff you're putting out there. I know you want constructive criticism, but it's already a full telling.

Hmm...any chance you could add some dialogue?

[valdelane]

Mmm, nicely done.