FIC: Return to Sin, Fleur/Gabrielle and others, R

[sweetcarolanne]

Many apologies for my long absence - have been really busy with one thing and another, but am back now with plenty of fic for all! Here's one now

Comments

[holyfant]

Ooh, lovely. I love the difference between Gabrielle's love for Luna and her love for Fleur and how aware she is of how it might be seen as wrong.

[sweetcarolanne]

Thank you - I am so happy you liked this! :)

[lash_larue]

Really tragically sweet story. Very nicely done!

That little girl in your icon is beautiful, and the least bit scary for some reason...

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[sweetcarolanne]

Thank you - I am glad you like this! :)

The little girl is - or was - very beautiful (sadly child actress Heather O'Rourke passed away in 1988). I suppose the slightly scary vibe comes from the fact that she's playing the character of Carol Anne in the horror movie Poltergeist, a favorite film of mine (this icon's from the same film).

[lash_larue]

Thank you, I had the feeling I had seen her somewhere before, just couldn't remember. She seems to be seeing something that I can't, now I understand why.

L

[la_dissonance]

Very intense; you made Gabrielle's emotions very real in this story. I could almost feel her obsession with Fleur. And it has so many layers to dig into - her love for Fleur vs. for her lovers, her (foolish?) hope that the future would be better, her guilt, my sympathy for her situation...Very well done indeed.

[mattxcornelia]

amazing, really amazing! I am tempted to write my congratulations for what u wrote in italian (i live in Italy), so for me it's difficult to express my p.o.v, but yes, what u wrote bewildered me!!!
I actually can see what u wrote!! and you have also choosen my two HP fav characters: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacours!! Love them!!

[sweetcarolanne]

Thank you - I am so glad you like this! :)

Re: Nicely done

[sweetcarolanne]

Thank you - I am so happy you like this! I hope you put your work back up again because I would love to read it and there are fans of it out there, I swear! I even did a manifesto for it at ship_manifesto!!!