COMMENT PORN (okay, not that porny, but hot hopefully)antigoneschaseApril 4 2009, 20:51:24 UTC
One heavy click of heels against cement and he turns toward the sound, his body straining toward it. He cannot speak, and he's been left without the gift of sight as well. She stands, looking over the vision he creates on the small bed, his arms captured above his head and his ankles spread and latched to the iron frame of the bed. She has the control, and she's left him no doubt about that. The blindfold and gag had just been the icing on the cake. One last way of taking all power away from him.
Not that he doesn't like it. She need not even look at the jut of his cock to know how much he craves the torment. After all, doesn't he whimper softly through the soft silk? And doesn't he reach for her, even though he knows how futile it is to even try?
She moves her hand, the crop in it light and as always feeling dangerous. One flick too hard, and she could damage him. The bad thing about that is that both of them would revel in that, and she can't risk the loss on control. Not now. One tiny movement of her wrist and the crop hits true, leaving a red mark on his inner thigh.
He lets out a breathless moan, lifting his hips almost off the bed, seeking more. He would ask for it if she left him his voice, but that voice has the special privilege of always making her do exactly what he asks, as soon as he does, and she doesn't want to give in. Not yet.
She doesn't speak, but she does move, and she watches him move his head as if tracking her movements. That's fine. Good, in fact. She won't completely surprise him, but that too can be fun. The shiver of anticipation, at the very least, makes her smirk lazily. Another flick of her wrist, and another red mark. This time almost too close to the base of his cock. Not for her. She knows exactly what she's doing for once in her life. He, however, hisses and almost pulls away.
She leans just a little, reaching to touch him, and the first brush of her fingers DOES make him pull away, until he realizes that the touch doesn't sting. Not that the next time won't. She is good at both pleasure and pain, and she loves nothing more than making him want both at once.
Her touch is quick, and it earns her another whimper. She laughs and stops, drawing back again. How it amuses her to imagine those who think of him as a cold, calculating killer seeing him like this, wanton and under her will. And how they would be confused by her like this, strong and powerful, so far from the Stockholm Syndrome they imagine for her.
Sometimes she wonders if he isn't the one with Stockholm Syndrome.
She reaches to run her nails up his leg from his knee, dragging them hard enough to leave deep red lines behind, the sound of surprise and pain he makes making her body react. She should have pressed harder, watched him bleed. Her breath is coming faster and she takes a step back, forcing herself to still.
He tries to say something past the gag and she feels a surge of heat, but she keeps her voice as cool as possible. "Sorry, love, I can't understand a word you say around that." She lets the smirk pull her face, knowing he'll hear it in her tone. She leans down again, pressing her mouth against his ear, her voice low and husky. "Did you say 'please'? Did you beg, John?"
She feels, rather than sees, him nod, and laughs under her breath. "I like it when you beg," she murmurs.
Re: COMMENT PORN (okay, not that porny, but hot hopefully)sweetcarolanneApril 4 2009, 23:13:05 UTC
OMG that is the hottest thing EVER!
I just love Domme!Amanda and John is willing to submit to her any time... I do hope you'll be inspired to write more of them soon... I am definitely inspired to perfect and soon post the spanking fic now!
*hugs you much* I do love this fic, and you for writing it - hope you'll post it to angelfiends too! My John muse adores submitting to Amanda! *hearts*
And how they would be confused by her like this, strong and powerful, so far from the Stockholm Syndrome they imagine for her.
Sometimes she wonders if he isn't the one with Stockholm Syndrome.
Re: COMMENT PORN (okay, not that porny, but hot hopefully)antigoneschaseApril 4 2009, 23:37:10 UTC
I'll probably write more of them in the next few days. It was fun to write,and Amanda is smirking at me, which usually means more porn is coming. *laughs*
I'm glad you liked it, honey! I may post it over there... it may need some editing and I may wait until I've got more so I can post something bigger. But I wanted to get that part out to you, since... well, since I could and I wanted you to smile.
*grins* She's always telling me John's the one with Stockholm, not her. I just roll my eyes. BUT maybe she has a point. LOL
Not that he doesn't like it. She need not even look at the jut of his cock to know how much he craves the torment. After all, doesn't he whimper softly through the soft silk? And doesn't he reach for her, even though he knows how futile it is to even try?
She moves her hand, the crop in it light and as always feeling dangerous. One flick too hard, and she could damage him. The bad thing about that is that both of them would revel in that, and she can't risk the loss on control. Not now. One tiny movement of her wrist and the crop hits true, leaving a red mark on his inner thigh.
He lets out a breathless moan, lifting his hips almost off the bed, seeking more. He would ask for it if she left him his voice, but that voice has the special privilege of always making her do exactly what he asks, as soon as he does, and she doesn't want to give in. Not yet.
She doesn't speak, but she does move, and she watches him move his head as if tracking her movements. That's fine. Good, in fact. She won't completely surprise him, but that too can be fun. The shiver of anticipation, at the very least, makes her smirk lazily. Another flick of her wrist, and another red mark. This time almost too close to the base of his cock. Not for her. She knows exactly what she's doing for once in her life. He, however, hisses and almost pulls away.
She leans just a little, reaching to touch him, and the first brush of her fingers DOES make him pull away, until he realizes that the touch doesn't sting. Not that the next time won't. She is good at both pleasure and pain, and she loves nothing more than making him want both at once.
Her touch is quick, and it earns her another whimper. She laughs and stops, drawing back again. How it amuses her to imagine those who think of him as a cold, calculating killer seeing him like this, wanton and under her will. And how they would be confused by her like this, strong and powerful, so far from the Stockholm Syndrome they imagine for her.
Sometimes she wonders if he isn't the one with Stockholm Syndrome.
She reaches to run her nails up his leg from his knee, dragging them hard enough to leave deep red lines behind, the sound of surprise and pain he makes making her body react. She should have pressed harder, watched him bleed. Her breath is coming faster and she takes a step back, forcing herself to still.
He tries to say something past the gag and she feels a surge of heat, but she keeps her voice as cool as possible. "Sorry, love, I can't understand a word you say around that." She lets the smirk pull her face, knowing he'll hear it in her tone. She leans down again, pressing her mouth against his ear, her voice low and husky. "Did you say 'please'? Did you beg, John?"
She feels, rather than sees, him nod, and laughs under her breath. "I like it when you beg," she murmurs.
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I just love Domme!Amanda and John is willing to submit to her any time... I do hope you'll be inspired to write more of them soon... I am definitely inspired to perfect and soon post the spanking fic now!
*hugs you much* I do love this fic, and you for writing it - hope you'll post it to angelfiends too! My John muse adores submitting to Amanda! *hearts*
And how they would be confused by her like this, strong and powerful, so far from the Stockholm Syndrome they imagine for her.
Sometimes she wonders if he isn't the one with Stockholm Syndrome.
Most perfect line EVER. *adores you*
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I'm glad you liked it, honey! I may post it over there... it may need some editing and I may wait until I've got more so I can post something bigger. But I wanted to get that part out to you, since... well, since I could and I wanted you to smile.
*grins* She's always telling me John's the one with Stockholm, not her. I just roll my eyes. BUT maybe she has a point. LOL
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I think she does have a point, and John is blushing, which means that maybe Amanda's right! *purr*
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(Hope you don't mind me reading it.)
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