The Good Samaritan, Chapter 5

[sweetcakes983]

Here is chapter 5! A big, huge THANK YOU to all who have reviewed! You really inspire me to continue writing this story! Another huge ‘thank you’ goes to my dear friend, Andrea! You know how much you help me!

--SC

Chapter 5: Rap Music and Lucky T-Shirts

The door banged open, Izzie’s hands full of plastic bags that were in

Comments

[_chica02]

Yay, an update! Excellent chapter, although I didn't take you for the type of mean person that would leave me hanging like that! ;P

Anyway, I love the not-so-perfect Izzie moment in the beginning. Makes her real. (And I have to interrupt with a quick "why can't real Izzie be like fic Izzie????" Now back to my regularly scheduled feedback...) I laughed aloud when Mark called and was all "we're going to the game, see ya at 6:15." Typical Mark. ;)

I also liked all the little details they found out about each other here. They've both revealed a lot to each other over the first four chapters--whether intentional or unintentional--but it was nice to see them talking/bantering casually and..."easily," I guess is the word. Like they genuinely feel comfortable around each other. It was interesting to see Mark admit that Izzie's the only person he "can stand" while I don't think Izzie's quite at the point where she can admit that to anyone but herself.

The end was a great twist! Didn't see it coming at all. Update soon! :D

Oh, and I've been wanting to mention, that I saw on your ff.net profile that you're a Y&R fan. I'm addicted to it as well. I'm warming up to Cadrian (and I'm glad that Adrian isn't a villain like they were making it look), but my main pairing is Phick (Nick and Phyllis)--I fell hard for those two. Anyway, I'd definitely be interested in reading your Cadrian fanfic!