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Intertwined Fates

Jul 17, 2011 00:49

Title: Intertwined Fates
Pairing: Changmin x Jaejoong (main), Yoochun x Junsu (slight)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Totally mine. :> Okay, I'm lying. But you believed me for a second, didn't you?
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Oneshot
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, reincarnation (and therefore, character death)

This was inspired by this.

( Some souls get the choice to repeat their lives with their beloved ones again. However, they have to be careful not to make the same mistakes. )

dbsk, rating: pg, genre: angst, character death, genre: romance, jaemin, genre: au, oneshot, yoosu, genre: drama

Comments 20

whatifgirl86 July 16 2011, 23:20:43 UTC

Oh God. That left me speechless. What to say... That said so much with so little if that makes sense. The emotion Jaejoong was feeling was very nicely portrayed. The division was nicely made since I would see Yunho and Changmin reacting like that, not to say that the other three don't value their families either. The ending was heart-wrenching seeing as how he is probably going to repeat the same cycle over and over again. I really enjoyed reading this:D I'm a sucker for Jaemin angst.

I read what this was inspired by and it was truly amazing and depressing.

sweetballads July 17 2011, 14:39:03 UTC

Aww, I'm glad you liked it! :D

And it isn't as if JYJ didn't value their family, it's just that they are willing to sacrifice a lot for their loves. The comparison kind of came to me with the whole twitter-drama when Keep Your Head Down was released. A lot of celebrities from SM took sides, stating that JYJ turned their backs to their family etc.

And I knooww, I'm getting all teary-eyed when I just think about it ;_;

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sweetballads July 17 2011, 14:39:27 UTC

I knowww. ;___;

shinchul303 July 17 2011, 02:00:16 UTC

Oh dear. Jaejoong, stuck on the wheel...

Thank you for the link to the inspiration post. It was awesome!

sweetballads July 17 2011, 14:42:41 UTC

I know. :c Jaejoong hopes he'll be wiser in his next lives.

dulanis July 17 2011, 05:30:51 UTC

This is sooo sad and yet the same time beautiful. Why can't Jae have his happy ending? Why should it be like this? I hope you would write a second part or a sequel.

sweetballads July 17 2011, 14:45:20 UTC

I was actually considering turning this into a twoshot but I don't know if I should. I think it'd end the same, with an open ending or even an unhappy one...

I might write a revised one, though. It hasn't even been a day since I posted this but I'm already regretting that I've written this so fast ;p (I'm really impatient so yeah, I just posted it when I was done). There are so many scenes which only came to me when I thought I was finished.. so I might write a revised version.

I'm glad you liked it, though! :)

dulanis July 17 2011, 14:52:38 UTC

I know. The story left me hanging, like I needed something to finish it off, yet it was complete in its own. I was confised for a nanosecond, but I am sad about the way it ended. But not all stories do end up with happy endings. I enjoyed the story. if you can post the revised one I would gladly read it.

sweetballads July 17 2011, 19:32:50 UTC

Haha, I'm sorry about that. ;p Things always turn out differently than I'd originally planned to write (though this had an unhappy ending at first... now, it's just an open ending so I think this ending is 'more satisfying' xD though I hate open endings myself as well)

I might consider writing a revised version :) I'm not entirely sure, though, but if I do, you should be able to see it appearing ..somewhere lol xD

archangelsteph July 17 2011, 08:50:56 UTC

wow i really don't know what to say...i loved this even though it was quite sad

sweetballads July 17 2011, 14:46:12 UTC

Hehe, I'm glad you did! It was meant to be sad (or else I would have put some unicorns and rainbows in it haha) but it means even more to me that you loved it!