'tis the nightingale and not the lark (3/3)

[sweet_mintx]

Title: 'tis the nightingale and not the lark
Pairing: sekai
Rating: pg-13
Genre: romance, romeo&juliet!au, mafia!au
Length: 12000~w
Summary: Happily ever afters just don't always happen.

Comments

[neoragodestiny]

i'm gasping for air and trying to make sure i breathe oh gods my heart is in shreds
THERE ARE TEARS ;____________________;
i just - the last few paragraphs. i'm - ;AAAAA;
the fact jongin was smiling, because he knew, he knew it would come down to this, and he just kept walking forward until he couldn't anymore and ;n;
and chanyeol shooting sehun as revenge for jongin, because he loved jongin too, and he said /sorry/ because he knew that jongin loved sehun, but he didn't think he could just sit there and not do anything
AND I'M JUST IN A LOT OF PAIN RIGHT NOW
i'm sorry i cant think of a better comment, but just... ;n; /PAIN/
this was beautiful. you had amazing descriptions that made me feel feather light when jongin felt that way, and burdened like there was a deadweight in my chest at the end ;_______;
this was just... wonderful. thank you for writing and for sharing ;u;

[sweet_mintx]

hahaha ;A;

DONT BE IN PAIN THAT MAKES ME FEEL BAD OMG

and thank you for reading and liking this story!!! :)

[neoragodestiny]

BUT PAIN BECAUSE YOU WRITE SO WELL YOU MAKE ME FEEL PAIN??? okay imma stop with the caps hahaha
you're most welcome~ ^^ thank you for the lovely read ^^ <3 ((even if it tore me apart))

[sehunscar510]

This story should be read by all sekai shippers and even non sekai shippers bc it's amazing! I was feeling like watching a theatrical play unfolding before my eyes with all the build up and painful resolution and sniff sniff... And you mix so well the angst (romeoxjuliette) and the suspense (mafia element) together to make this piece novel. Im thankful that you wrote this and decided to share with everybody!!! Thank u <3

[sweet_mintx]

ahaha :) thank you so much for your comment ;A; and for reading! i really appreciate it :D

[dancedealer]

FUUUCCCCCKK oh MY GOODD
;u;
everything was so clear and yet it was impossibly beautiful OTL what do I dooooo
Thank you so much i will never doubt the clarity again!

He decided to stop trying to fix the fault in the stars, stop trying to alter fate so it would flow along with his wishes.
hell i was a bout to CRY A RIVER ;;

[3star4life]

Oh my god I'm crying. I mean it had to end this way, but still hurts. Ouch. Darn. But your writing it amazing!! My heart clenched during that scene where they just sat holding hands and looking out Sehun's window. Amazing piece!

[puppyjongin]

this was so heartbreakingly beautiful and very well written. I've been wanting to read a mafia!sekai fic an you gave me one so thanks 💕