New Fic: "Whisper Through Skin"

[sweet_crazyass]

Title: Whisper Through Skin - 1/3

Fandom: Lost

Pairing: Jack/Sawyer

Warning: Adults only, language and sexual situations. Spoilers for S2, speculation for S3.

***

Sawyer doesn’t even know it’s happening until it’s over.

Fear and rage, bound and gagged, then the startling light and the more startling and painful noise; Michael gone, deal made

Comments

[siluria]

Wow! What I love about your writing is you manage to interchange fic full of fantastic crack, with much darker pieces and yet I adore the pacing and the feeling in each one. I love how this is entirely from Sawyer's point of view; we have as much idea of what is going on around him as he does and that makes for a much starker reality, a world of confusion and isolation, and I can't wait for the next two parts.

[sweet_crazyass]

Thank you! I actually prefer to write the crack!fic, because then I can do whatever I want, but occasionally bunnies like this bite.

Sorry it took me so long to respond!

[rawkin_ur_sox]

This sounds so good for a new fic. The dialogue between them, even if it was mind talking, was on. The exhange was also on, and did I mention I love how it's sounding so far?

I loved it more than I thought I would, but then again, it's your fic. Of course it's going to be awesome. ;) Is there more? I want more of this. Like, now.

[sweet_crazyass]

Thanks!

*hugs*

[allegraconbrio]

Oh, yes! fantastic, just fantastic.

[sweet_crazyass]

THANK YOU!

*SOOPERSQUISH OF DOOOOOOOOOOOM*

[rogueapprentice]

Oh, excellent. JUST excellent. Where did you even come up with this idea? Very amazing. It's difficult to write anything where your protagonist can't see or hear, and you nailed it beautifully.

NOW WHERE IS THE HOT GIRL ON GIRL ACTION YOU SPOKE OF?! ;D

[sweet_crazyass]

Thanks! And I was initially gonna do this with Desmond, a gajillion things happened in that hatch that could have made him lose his sight or hearing, but I can't write Desmond - he hates me or something..

NO GIRL ON GIRL UNTIL THAT BUNNY COMES BACK!

[laliu]

ooo, dark and sensuous. fics are often very visual, but your premise allows for different, intensified sensations and gets us right on in there with sawyer. loved swimming in sawyer's head (even though it's very sad for sawyer in there) and hope to do it again soon.

[sweet_crazyass]

Thanks! And my apologies for taking so long to respond; the second part was eating me alive.