Fools Rush In 1/1 (PG, Gen, Humor)

[swanseajill]

 Title:  Fools Rush In
Author:  Swanseajill
Characters:  Dean, Sam

Pairing:  None

Words:  2,632
Spoilers:  None

Disclaimer:  Don’t own them, making no money from them.

Summary:  The boys hunt a legendary monster in the swamps of Louisiana.  Will Dean’s desire to get the job finished quickly land him in more trouble than he’d bargained for?

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[iamstealthyone]

I love this fic, dear! Great narrative voice, and so much wonderful humor. I love Sam being snarky and “I told you so.”

Well done!

Favorite lines:

You rocked the table.”

“And you spilled a whole mug of coffee over Dad’s journal.”

Sam glared some more. “Yeah. Because you rocked the table.”

LOL! I love their bickering here.

"You’re so right. Who needs food when they can have Nancy? That girl’s totally edible."

Dean’s such a horndog. *g*

“Man!” Dean said. “Was that a Wookie?”

Yup. A Wookie. That was it.

LOL! I love him being all snarky. I can totally picture his face here.

Big? Check. Slimy? Check. Ugly? Double check. Stupid? Too soon to tell.

*snickers*

“Stain your skin green?” Dean thundered. A large glob of slime dripped off his face and plopped wetly onto the ground below, leaving a decidedly green streak behind.

I love this image!

“Maybe you can get Nancy to do the scrubbing,” Sam suggested helpfully.

*snickers* Sam’s enjoying himself immensely, and I don’t blame him. Dean really did ask for it.

He wondered which of their few friends he could send the photo to first.

*g*

[swanseajill]

Hey there! Thanks for taking time to comment after all the hard work you've done on the story already. Glad the humor works for you - it's so much harder to write than angst!