Comments | swamp_ariadne: Own Your Pleasure

swamp_ariadne

Own Your Pleasure - Fanfic, Rated R

Sep 25, 2010 03:16

Title: Own Your Pleasure
Rating: R / MA
Pairing: Dom/Ariadne

Author swamp_ariadne

Response to Prompt: community.livejournal.com/inception_kink/756.html and thursdays_girl request. Submitted to D/A Smut week, though it is double the word count limit. Oh well, double the fun (I hope). concrit welcome.
Warnings: Sexually explicit content.

( Cobb talks Ariadne through... )

pairing: cobb/ariadne, character: dom, cobb, dom_ariadne, smut, character: ariadne

Comments 16

thursdays_girl September 24 2010, 20:57:41 UTC

After the semi-shitty twelve hours I've had, to come back from class and see this? You totally just made my day.

That was so very, freakin' hot. Loved it.

swamp_ariadne September 25 2010, 01:35:43 UTC

i'm glad that i delivered ;)

the setup really ran away with me sorry. and is it pathetic if i admit that i actually tried to get my husband to participate in this exercise and he just looked at me with a "you just go do your thing" look, leaves the bedroom and plops himself in front of the TV?

he comes back in the middle, while i was typing up the end of the phone sex bit and says "Did you know they use a lot of gears and wires in the making of Corpse Bride?". I mean really - Corpse Bride? Completely derailed any thoughts I had! I had to boot him out of the room and center myself so I could get rid of Corpse Bride Ariadne in my head. It wasn't funny.

thursdays_girl September 25 2010, 03:08:38 UTC

GIRL I JUST GOT BACK IN BUT IT'S KINK PROMPT TIME.

Round 8 kink prompt swamp_ariadne September 25 2010, 11:49:48 UTC

so many unfilled prompts, so little time. not sure if we should add any more if we only have a 20% fill rate so far.

Thread 5

boredcollie September 24 2010, 23:19:34 UTC

I agree, that's was totally hot.

I also thought the phone sex made for a good humorous/awkward intro.

Inception News: September 24, 2010 pingback_bot September 24 2010, 23:27:13 UTC

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tita_undomiel September 25 2010, 01:03:10 UTC

OMG! I just posted mine down at the community and compared to yours... I'm a prude!!!!!!!

I loved this! The phone sex in the begining was perfect!

finnijer September 25 2010, 06:40:57 UTC

Corpse Bride? You poor dear. Shame on him for derailing thought. This was lovely. I like both versions although Dom's filthy mouth was just as fun ;)