though the brightest fell (oneshot)

May 27, 2013 14:21

title: though the brightest fell
genre: sci-fi, semi-angel!au
rating: r // (whoops)
pairing: sukai
length: ~5k words
warnings: (many) character deaths, slight violence/gore?!, vague smut (lol), language
summary: Jongin is the mistake, broken wings dragging across dusty streets and dark alleyways. Junmyeon is the angel who can't fly.

This is the fight of the damned. )

length: oneshot, pairing: suho/kai, rating: r, genre: sci-fi, !fanfic

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mebeforeyou June 11 2013, 12:25:52 UTC
-Junmyeon collapses in front of Jongin, eyes lifeless and limp; someone’s swinging a dark shape at his head now, there’s an exploding pain between his eyes, and everything goes black.
He wakes up in an alleyway, the image of Junmyeon dying flashing in his eyes over and over again, the only comprehensible thought in his mind echoing Junmyeon Junmyeon Junmyeonjunmyeonjunmyeonjunmyeon.

and THIS HTIS HIT THIS THIS IS WHERE HANNA JUMPS AROUND SHRIEKING IN HER HEAD THAT SHE WILL KILL FUCKING KILL BLUU FOR DOING THIS TO HER AND HER SUKAI AND THIS IS UNFORGIVABLE BUT /hits ((lovingly))

and then baekhyun died

and then jongin died

and i just

you

killed

them

all

Junmyeon. He bends over slightly, staring down at the ground below him. “Yah, Byun Baekhyun!” The call echoes down the side of the building, into the wind, disappearing like the lost dreams, hopes, and wishes he’s never had.

He jumps, eyes closed, and for a moment before the end, he’s soaring through the air at last.

hmmmm ok that was painful bluu fuck you but OKAY I LOVED how you mentioned all three there lmfao and then jongin died hahah ha hah ah hha h but at least he's going after joonmyun haha hah ha hah hah ha /lies down on the ground sobbing

this is absolutely wonderful bluu idek how to tell you how much i love it and how thankful i am that you wrote this DJAOISGJAOSDJaDASFASD jongin's and joonmyun's characters were wonderful and byun baekhyun was so dark and bitter yet lovely and i just

sukai's love was beautiful ;_; so beautiful ;_;

i lovehate you ;_;

here, have this turtle's heart ♥

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swabluu June 11 2013, 23:49:42 UTC
I'M SORRY JUNMYEON WASN'T EVEN MEANT TO DIE IN THE BEGINNING NEITHER WAS BAEKHYUN I JUST FELT LIKE KILLING THEM OOPS I'M SORRY /hides

but
jongin
was
destined
to
die
from
the
very
beginning
8D

i must admit i had way too much fun writing about jongin dying 8D

/shot

everyone diesssssssssss yeeeeeeeeeeee party timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee runs around /shot

eeeee well i only love you no hate involved whatsoever ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

cries thank you so much hanna bb these were such lovely comments to read ♥

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