cold dark frozen (oneshot)

[swabluu]

title: cold dark frozen
genre: (extremely fail) horror
rating: pg-13
pairing: xiuhan
length: 2440 words
warning: character death
summary: luhan is poison, and poison is addicting.

Comments

[gokulex59]

THIS IS SO AWESOME AND EPIC THAT I CAN'T EVEN FUCKING COMPREHEND WHAT I'm FEELING.

Of course, I can write a sane, mature comment about how professional you wrote and how well it is and such, BUT WHERE IS THE FUN IN THAT? ESPECIALLY WHEN THIS IS JUST THE FIC I WANTED?

When I see a sci-fi XiuHan, adventure XiuHan, crack XiuHan, action XiuHan or one of the rare horror XiuHans, I always write the same thing. About how I am actually not fond of romance and these are my favorite genres, but they are sooo rare and all. I'm repeating the same; horror fics are terribly hard to write, not much people like it and these are the main reasons why it's so fucking rare - I hate it. What is rarer than horror fics is GOOD horror fics, and this fanfiction is the best horror fanfiction I've read so far. Out of all fandoms I'm in, I only managed to find around ten horror fics and only half of them (at most) were satisfying. And this, my lady, this had just the atmosphere I needed.

That "parts are randomly thrown" thing… wait a little bit… WAS AN AWESOME IDEA. It strengthens the atmosphere, the taste and those parts are lined up so properly that each one of them has a connection with the one before and the one after. It's neat. I can't find the words to describe -probably because English isn't my native language, it happens quite often- but really, what made me think this is professional is that style.

I listened to Ion by Apocalyptica while reading, and wow for the second time in my life music fit the story I read. It's a very rare thing to happen to me, and the speed of my reading, the music and the plot synchronized so well that every part of the story had most suitable parts of the music. This may have increased my like for this fanfiction, but trust me, the story itself is epic by its own.

Thank you for writing such a successful fic, and no I don't usually thank people for writing something. Such great fic made me really happy, I think I'm gonna have this printed.

[swabluu]

OH MY GOSH LET ME LOVE YOU FOR SUCH A LOVELY LONG COMMENT?????? /rolls all over you

But wow when I saw this in my inbox I nearly cried ;; even though it was in the middle of school (oops). ajdskfjasldfjsad thank you soooo very much ;AAAAAAA; and tbh I don't really think this fic was all that scary or good ;; but this made me feel so much happier and totally made my day wow oh my gosh ;;

Ahh I'm glad you noticed!! IT TOOK ME FOREVERRR TO FIGURE OUT THE ORDER FOR THE MIXING UP OF THE PARTS IT WAS SO PAINFUL but yes!! I did it to emphasize the horror setting (heh), and I'm glad you noticed! ahh, English isn't my first language either SO I COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND

Ahh cries thank you for appreciating my crappy writing ;; I feel so honored and wajldkfasdjf wow omg this totally just made my day ;; <33333

[gokulex59]

Oh no no no, I don't find words scary; but atmosphere was successfully dark like how a horror story must be, that's what I meant. But it IS good, so good that I wrote that comment on phone - I never comment on LJ on phone. I'm glad that my comment made you happy though, happy talented author is what I aim at haha.

[swabluu]

ahh cries omg this makes me feel so honored ;__;
haha omg thank you so much <333