as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away) [part 2/2]
Title: as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away)
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.
Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used: i + ii
( Sehun looks at Junmyun and Junmyun understands that it isn’t about the girl, it’s about Junmyun and Kyungsoo and love and acceptance and something called letting go. )
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.
Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used: i + ii
( Sehun looks at Junmyun and Junmyun understands that it isn’t about the girl, it’s about Junmyun and Kyungsoo and love and acceptance and something called letting go. )
I knew this fic would be gold as soon as I saw the plot outline sobs--which thank you so much for sharing with me, I am honored. But more than that I had to keep rereading "He has failed. Over and over. Again and again." because good god the words just kept burning my eyesss and sobs. And this was just great and so well written and l o l I can't believe you finished this in 9K?!?! and sobs your words are so natural and easy and sobs I just sobs STILL JEALOUS CAN YOU HOLD MY TEARS FOR A SECOND while I slap myself back to normality ugh. But basically I loved the way you ended this~ I get this really really big looming feeling over my head--the feeling you get when you finish reading something just right, and this was right in all the ways.
uhhh right as in well-written and well-thought, i mean. not like. right as in i actually want brat and gramps to be uhhh--if you know what i mean l o l. also even tho this wasn't a domesticy fic at all I kept getting domestic!suho feels from this and I just, I don't know, THIS FIC IS REALLY GETTING TO ME SHRIEEEEKS.
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sobs howwwwww no this is not good ahhhhhh but at least the ending effect worked yayyyyyy :DDDDD sobs i reread this after posting and went "wtf did i write ;A;"
LOL BUT LEADERMAKNAE IS LEGIT KIND OF xD and domestic!suho omg really lollol \o/
well don't shriek too much changie and i hope your jaw gets better \o/ okay i really should start hw now crap ;A;
AND THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU ;AAAAAA;
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