fic: girls night out

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Okay, this is an extremely belated birthday fic for lynzie914 who wanted a Chlo-Lo girls night out story. I'm really really sorry it took me so long to deliver but I hope that you like it!

Title: Girls Night Out
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing/Characters: Chloe, Lois, mentions of Chloe/Oliver & Clark/Lois
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3016
Warnings/Spoilers: none/

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

Aww, this was sweet! And fun, too!

I love the way you write these kinds of stories: fun and light and the characters getting to do normal things instead of always running around saving the world. :)

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Yay! I'm glad you thought so and liked it. :D

I love the way you write these kinds of stories: fun and light and the characters getting to do normal things instead of always running around saving the world. :)
Well, they get to save the world so much on the show so I tend to write about them getting to do day to day things or enjoy life a little bit. Plus, action isn't really my genre. ;D I am happy that it works for you though!

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :)

[lynzie914]

I saw this (just after I replied to your comment, LOL) and got super excited and I completely loved it! You have their voices down SO well and you had me giggling constantly.

“By the way, boy toy, if you’re here for a booty call, I have a request: either take it to the bedroom or disinfect wherever you’ve been. I happen to like the furniture, but I don’t want to know what my baby cousin has done on it. Or rather who.”

This part and Ollie's reaction had me cracking up. So funny and so something Lois would say to him. It still has me giggling reading it now.

I loved them getting ready and just the little things you included there, like Lois' closet exploding into the room and the helping each other get ready to make up for lost high school time. So cute! And I loved their converstation about the waiter and the boys at the table, I was giggling along with them. I loved that entire scene.

Giggling, Chloe confessed, “Actually, my favorite part of Ollie is his arms.”Not gonna lie, this part made me squee a little. You know how I

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Success! I am so glad that you liked and are happy with it! :D

You have their voices down SO well and you had me giggling constantly.
That's so good to hear. Characterization is something that I worry about and I am really relieved that you think I got their voices right.

This part and Ollie's reaction had me cracking up. So funny and so something Lois would say to him. It still has me giggling reading it now.
Ollie technically wasn't even in the plan but he just popped up and I couldn't resist Lois snarking at him. She so would and I could picture him being all "???" while Chloe laughs in the background.

Whew. I am really thrilled that you liked all those scenes. I know it ended up being more 'pre girls night out' than actual girls night out and I was a bit concerned about that. I totally want them to talk about guys on the show so since they didn't, I decided to write it. Yay for it making you giggle! That's what I was going for.

Not gonna lie, this part made me squee a little. You know how I love his arms, so this just

[lynzie914]

Very, very happy with it. XD

I totally want them to talk about guys on the show so since they didn't, I decided to write it.

Agreed, not enough girl talk on the show, especially with all those pretty boys around. But I'm more than happy with having you write it, because you write it so well. :D

I remembered that you have a thing for his arms and that's why I totally added in line so I'm very excited that you noticed!

Oh that's so nice!! And it makes me love it even more. Thank you for that.

NGL, I'm awful at starting/ending fics so it's good to hear that it worked.

I completely understand with that. I usually have the middle written or figured out before I even know how to begin or end it. Endings especially, because my muse is never sure whether it should just end there, or if there should be a bit more. LOL.

Don't even worry about the time. I'm just happy that you wrote such an amazing story for me. I know I've said it a bunch of times now but thank you for that. XD

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That makes me happy. :D

Agreed, not enough girl talk on the show, especially with all those pretty boys around. But I'm more than happy with having you write it, because you write it so well. :D

Right? I wish we had some more girl bonding. They were so cute in s5, like in that scene where Chloe and Lois are the DP, just eating and talking. And aww, you're always too nice to me. :)

Oh that's so nice!! And it makes me love it even more. Thank you for that.
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I completely understand with that. I usually have the middle written or figured out before I even know how to begin or end it. Endings especially, because my muse is never sure whether it should just end there, or if there should be a bit more. LOL.
Same here! I'll have scenes planned out and I'm like, "no, you have to find a away to GET THERE FIRST." *sighs* Muses. Mine don't shut up either so usually, they don't want to end there, lol.

Don't even worry about the time. I'm just happy that you wrote such an amazing story for me. I know I've said it a bunch of times now but

[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely loved this girls night out!

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Thanks. Glad you liked it.