Fic: Third Time's the Charm

Mar 06, 2009 18:31

This one is a belated birthday fic for my dear babydracky. I hope you like this! :D

Title: Third Time's The Charm
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing/Characters: Oliver/Lois
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
Word Count: 3,431
Spoilers: 8.03 "Toxic"
Summary: During a storm, Ollie comes to check in on Lois and it turns into something more.
Author’s Notes: ( Read more... )

ship: lois/oliver, story: third time's the charm, category: het, fanfic, fandom: smallville

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svgurl March 7 2009, 04:44:37 UTC
I do love Lollie. They were a cute ship on the show and underappreciated in this fandom. I'm so glad you liked this fic!

As for Lois giving in, well, can you blame her? ;D

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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vodooman March 7 2009, 09:45:41 UTC
aaaaawwwweee! that was really cute! makes me change my mind about never shipping clollie! ... yup! totally changed my mind...

and i absolutly love how authentic you wrote lois... witht he speech and all!

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svgurl March 7 2009, 09:54:40 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it and that you gave Lollie a chance! I'm very flattered that it changed your mind on the ship. While it's not my OTP, I did like the chemistry that Lois and Ollie as well as the way the relationship was handled. It was, in my opinion, one of the few romantic relationships on SV that was handled maturely. :)

And I'm even happier that you enjoyed the way I wrote Lois! She's one of my favorite characters and I want to do her justice. :)

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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babydracky March 7 2009, 13:07:48 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Thank you so much!!
I can't believe it! It is for me?♥
*beams*

I really like it ! It is just so cute, so romantic and poignant.
They would be great together! They really would!

You made me so Happy, puce!
You really did! You made my day♥

And you're writing a so authentic SV Lois.
This is perfeclty her and I like her that way! A woman who is always fighting but a fighter who knows to admit that she needs others, that she needs that blond man back in her life!

*HUGS YOU REALLY REALLY TIGHT*

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svgurl March 7 2009, 19:41:07 UTC
Yay! You're welcome! I'm so glad you liked it! And of course it's for you. I am just really sorry it's late. &hearts :D

It was my first Lollie first so I was a little bit nervous but your feedback makes me really relieved and extremely happy. :D

I totally agree that they would be great together. Those two are just adorable. :)

And you're writing a so authentic SV Lois.
You know Lois is one of my favorite people on this show so that you think I did her justice really is a compliment. I do see her as someone who is a fighter but has a vulnerable side.

*hugs back*

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babydracky March 17 2009, 12:39:58 UTC
Don't be sorry^^ You made my day!
It's true that it was your first Lollie and it was really nice!♥
Lois is a really strong woman that's why she really needs someone she can trust to be a shoulder to cry on! ^^

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svgurl March 17 2009, 19:52:28 UTC
I am happy to hear that I made your day. :D

And I am even happier that my first Lollie worked. :D

Lois is a really strong woman that's why she really needs someone she can trust to be a shoulder to cry on! ^^
Yup, I agree. Even though she's tough, she does have a vulnerable side and Ollie can be the man to take care of her. :D

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shelly505 March 8 2009, 03:01:22 UTC
Awww this is so adorable! Hee, I love the ending!

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svgurl March 8 2009, 03:10:04 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And I had to give those two a happy ending. As for the 'Wither' reference? I couldn't resist. ;D I am very happy to hear it worked for you. :D

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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Story is total love! eternal_moonie March 8 2009, 19:32:20 UTC
Love it!!!

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Re: Story is total love! svgurl March 8 2009, 23:46:01 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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