Timor (part 3 of...5)

Jun 12, 2009 13:33


Title: Timor (portugese for fear, like the shakira song. you better believe I'm gonna change that, sometime. :p )
Rating: T(for this part) , yeaahhh, it's changing next time around. Right now, smackdowns, and blood is flying all over the place. Somebody dies, oh noes. Somebody is high.
Length: Long. for this part, 4268 words.
Summary: Despite what ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

paraxdisepink June 14 2009, 08:21:24 UTC
Connecting with Davis' inner badass is a must. What can I say, I like Davis' ass, bad or otherwise hee!

(at least I didn't write the other scenario where Chloe *got* Davis to activate his heat vision and defeat Doomsday and Ollie died of indignation at his Watchtower being used for *that*. )

Okay, right now I am feeling the loss of the aforementioned scene.

Eh fanboys can suck it. They just don't like Davis because they're threatened by his hotness.

The signs, so much word. Plus, I would've given a tooth (a very small one) to see Jimmy with the junkie jitters.

Silly girl, only the African American characters get those on this show! A white character would never be portrayed in such a way on Smallville! Don't you know? Although Davis was acting kinda tweakerish in Beast, but he's a foster kid, so . . .

And yes! feminist rage! I think there could a be a very special comm dedicated to calling out SV on its shit messages. Makes me want to poke out some eyes or wonder who the writers are dating. I DUN WANNA KNOW.

Heh Poking out eyes is symbolic of castration! Oh SV and it's messages . . . don't even get me started on the Kents. It's the perfect family . . . where the intelligent wife gives up her career and chances of really making something of her life to serve her husband at dinner while he sits on his judgemental plattitude spouting ass. He probably wouldn't have let Davis come over because he's a foster kid. It's his fault Clark and Lex never got it on.

I would have liked him to see that mistake with something epic, but noes because the writers love storylines where the-tragic-hero-who-gives-up-his -life/OTL-to-save-the-world was only really a psycho as opposed to the pristine-cleanliness-of-he-who-attempts-to-murder-an-unarmed-man-to-whom-he -feels-inferiority-to (with a pipe!)

Yeah well this show is messed up. All lickable likeable decent characters such as Adam Knight, Lex, Jason Teague, and Davis who make Clark and now Jimmy look bad must turn out to be obsessive psychos because because because . . . uh I dunno. And oh yeah Jimmy's all suicidal in Beast because Davis took Chloe from him? LIke that's mentally stable. The dumbass is too wacked to remember he divorced her. He so shoulda flipped it and attacked Davis. It would have been awesome.

Clark and Davis would be a very slashless love. Omar described their Prey interaction as the 'least gay look of the episode'. (now Robin Hood BBC is becoming quite the opposite).

haha I laugh so hard in Plastique when Clark first meets Davis and says, "Yeah I thought I got off the elevator a little early." It just sounds so dirty the way TW says it, so in my head it means, "YOu're so hot I prematurely ejaculated when I saw you."
haha

Dig yourself out of that plot hole. Myself, I'm standing in my own plotholes just staring and I can't bring myself to write Zod dialogue. The cheese takes away from the emotional reality of the story and it's bugging me. Plus Zod = giggles. So many giggles.

Reply

vagrantdream July 5 2009, 02:00:56 UTC
The nice thing about almost finishing a fic is being able to come back to comments. XD

Connecting with Davis' inner badass is a must. What can I say, I like Davis' ass, bad or otherwise hee!
Two kinda-words for you. The beast-fortress-throwdown caps.

teehee. Seriously, I want to do something like LiarLiar again. mocking everything(and with a slightly nymphomaniac twinge! Until then I am doing shear (with notexactly!fun redk but ...), a almost-but-not-quite-lighthearted redk thing given to me by *someone*, the medieval thing, which I have just succeeded in making Davis take off his shirt... (not to mention a uniform kink idea, and something in an alley)
yeah, *what* pure virginal mind huh?

ohhh. poking out eyes! I almost forgot that little bit of subtext. haha Oedipus Rex. Not I've got a thinky dilemma. how can something be removed if it didn't exist in the first place?

It's the perfect family . . . where the intelligent wife gives up her career and chances of really making something of her life *to serve her husband at dinner while he sits on his judgmental platitude spouting ass. He probably wouldn't have let Davis come over because he's a foster kid. It's his fault Clark and Lex never got it on.*
This might just be my favorite new quote of yours. And I've never even seen Jonathan, other than Eternal, but if his ass does that, count me out. freakytimes! makes me almost ship Martha/notsosaint!Lionel.

And oh yeah Jimmy's all suicidal in Beast because Davis took Chloe from him? LIke that's mentally stable. The dumbass is too wacked to remember he divorced her. He so shoulda flipped it and attacked Davis. It would have been awesome.
I was waiting for that with baited breath. I would've gotten popcorn. He was so bipolar there. first he's like Chloe bye! you fuBU%#*&! and then he's all like YOU DESTROYED MY WIFELIFE, you BEASSSTTT!! yeah. racked out and bipolar. Doomvis is totally jerking his chain right now.

Plastique: remind me to read the subtext, it adds a whole other dimension to things. Perhaps Davis's 'peeping Tom' comment was *for REALS*(Clark was missing Lex *that* much, not that he needed too much motivation).

I can just imagine that. Zod: KNEEL before ZOD to the entire wedding party in Chloe's wedding to the *right* guy. gigglesnort Oh yeah, and Gabe cocking his shotgun (okay, this is so an in joke for 'villain of the story')

Seriously, though, your ZOd is CRREEEPPPYY, just the way I like im.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up