Timor (part 3 of...5)
Title: Timor (portugese for fear, like the shakira song. you better believe I'm gonna change that, sometime. :p )
Rating: T(for this part) , yeaahhh, it's changing next time around. Right now, smackdowns, and blood is flying all over the place. Somebody dies, oh noes. Somebody is high.
Length: Long. for this part, 4268 words.
Summary: Despite what ( Read more... )
Hah Ollie!! You killed my favorite douche!
“You didn’t have to. He’s your best friend and you signed his death warrant because you both wanted to save me.
This is excellent. Such a shame the show didn't actually follow through with this.
Her hand fluttered helplessly over the spot where the shaft didn’t quite pierce through and she kept talking, kept telling him that the ambulance would be there soon. She didn’t know if Jimmy had really gone to get it or if he had just been that desperate to get away.
It is so much more fitting for Jimmy to misguidedly try and kill Davis. For the people who don't care for Davis, it's karmic because Dooms hurt Jimmy (though that was Brainiac's doing), and if you like Davis it preserves the sense of victimhood and it's tragic. Also, Jimmy shown some signs having this in him - his comment to Davis in Prey about checking Chloe's PDA, his willingness to assault Davis because he thinks he's trying to kill him and steal Chloe, his drug addiction, etc. It would have been far more interesting. But no . . . the show wants to sell out to fanboys and indulge this idiot belief that you can treat a girl like crap and she'll take you back and dump a hotter guy who actually values her if you buy her the right present because all women are whores and Tv is about keeping women's expectations low. Real men are jerks, stick with them. Those guys that actually respect you and value you as a person? There's something wrong with them. See! You can't do better than Jimmy. Such bullshit. See you started me on my feaminist rage.
It wasn’t easy to look into Clark’s face, bruised and marked and bloodied and not see him there. They were brothers after all, Clark said and when he woke she knew he was going to find a reason why it was all his fault.
I like the throwback to the brothers thing. I'm on that too. I want them to be brothers damnit and heal the House of Zod/El epic feud with their brotherly (and sadly slashless) love.
He’d become the man he’d wanted to be and he hadn’t needed her to love him for that. Then he’d died, and she...
Yeah! I'm on this too, but from a different angle. He didn't need her to be that man for however many years of his life he's been helping people being sweet as pie, etc. You go, Davis. Die your epic death.
So he's going to come back from the dead and then they can have sex? *hopeful*
So many things to like and this part has this awesomeone momentum to it and this real climactic feel. Althought hopefully the real climaxes are yet to come (haha see what did there?)
Okay back to work over here on more violence and angst.
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And yeah, he's all protector-y, even with the ouches.
Characters I adore always seem to get hurt a lot. Minus the favorite douche, of course. I still found him interesting so he almost got a worthy ending. the MISSION!I think. (at least I didn't write the other scenario where Chloe *got* Davis to activate his heat vision and defeat Doomsday and Ollie died of indignation at his Watchtower being used for *that*. )
But seriously, you *knew* I was going to kill Ollie.
Davis drilled it in again, in case anyone didn't catch that. but he's still like, it's because you both wanted to save me and just that.
Yeah. then the fanboys could have their its Karmic moment and then get over it. And we can feel the delicious Eternal angst. So we could dig out the chocolate and wallow in all the tragic beauty.
Also, Jimmy shown some signs having this in him - his comment to Davis in Prey about checking Chloe's PDA, his willingness to assault Davis because he thinks he's trying to kill him and steal Chloe, his drug addiction, etc.
The signs, so much word. Plus, I would've given a tooth (a very small one) to see Jimmy with the junkie jitters.
And yes! feminist rage! I think there could a be a very special comm dedicated to calling out SV on its shit messages. Makes me want to poke out some eyes or wonder who the writers are dating. I DUN WANNA KNOW.
Ah yes the brothers. Methinks it was Clark failing horribly to be *superior idiot* in Beast to distance himself.
I would have liked him to see that mistake with something epic, but noes because the writers love storylines where the-tragic-hero-who-gives-up-his -life/OTL-to-save-the-world was only really a psycho as opposed to the pristine-cleanliness-of-he-who-attempts-to-murder-an-unarmed-man-to-whom-he -feels-inferiority-to (with a pipe!)
Clark and Davis would be a very slashless love. Omar described their Prey interaction as the 'least gay look of the episode'. (now Robin Hood BBC is becoming quite the opposite).
yep, I saw that in your thing.
It's almost like, ha, see that Chloe, you can't be such a martyr! ahem. He's awesome all on his own, in the past or in an epic!death.
lalalala. You did guess the Ollie thing after all.
You most certainly will keep your masquerading-as-a-first-class-perve badge, on account of that. Double digits.
oh yays. Me I'm going to dig myself out of a--- plot hole.
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(at least I didn't write the other scenario where Chloe *got* Davis to activate his heat vision and defeat Doomsday and Ollie died of indignation at his Watchtower being used for *that*. )
Okay, right now I am feeling the loss of the aforementioned scene.
Eh fanboys can suck it. They just don't like Davis because they're threatened by his hotness.
The signs, so much word. Plus, I would've given a tooth (a very small one) to see Jimmy with the junkie jitters.
Silly girl, only the African American characters get those on this show! A white character would never be portrayed in such a way on Smallville! Don't you know? Although Davis was acting kinda tweakerish in Beast, but he's a foster kid, so . . .
And yes! feminist rage! I think there could a be a very special comm dedicated to calling out SV on its shit messages. Makes me want to poke out some eyes or wonder who the writers are dating. I DUN WANNA KNOW.
Heh Poking out eyes is symbolic of castration! Oh SV and it's messages . . . don't even get me started on the Kents. It's the perfect family . . . where the intelligent wife gives up her career and chances of really making something of her life to serve her husband at dinner while he sits on his judgemental plattitude spouting ass. He probably wouldn't have let Davis come over because he's a foster kid. It's his fault Clark and Lex never got it on.
I would have liked him to see that mistake with something epic, but noes because the writers love storylines where the-tragic-hero-who-gives-up-his -life/OTL-to-save-the-world was only really a psycho as opposed to the pristine-cleanliness-of-he-who-attempts-to-murder-an-unarmed-man-to-whom-he -feels-inferiority-to (with a pipe!)
Yeah well this show is messed up. All lickable likeable decent characters such as Adam Knight, Lex, Jason Teague, and Davis who make Clark and now Jimmy look bad must turn out to be obsessive psychos because because because . . . uh I dunno. And oh yeah Jimmy's all suicidal in Beast because Davis took Chloe from him? LIke that's mentally stable. The dumbass is too wacked to remember he divorced her. He so shoulda flipped it and attacked Davis. It would have been awesome.
Clark and Davis would be a very slashless love. Omar described their Prey interaction as the 'least gay look of the episode'. (now Robin Hood BBC is becoming quite the opposite).
haha I laugh so hard in Plastique when Clark first meets Davis and says, "Yeah I thought I got off the elevator a little early." It just sounds so dirty the way TW says it, so in my head it means, "YOu're so hot I prematurely ejaculated when I saw you."
haha
Dig yourself out of that plot hole. Myself, I'm standing in my own plotholes just staring and I can't bring myself to write Zod dialogue. The cheese takes away from the emotional reality of the story and it's bugging me. Plus Zod = giggles. So many giggles.
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Connecting with Davis' inner badass is a must. What can I say, I like Davis' ass, bad or otherwise hee!
Two kinda-words for you. The beast-fortress-throwdown caps.
teehee. Seriously, I want to do something like LiarLiar again. mocking everything(and with a slightly nymphomaniac twinge! Until then I am doing shear (with notexactly!fun redk but ...), a almost-but-not-quite-lighthearted redk thing given to me by *someone*, the medieval thing, which I have just succeeded in making Davis take off his shirt... (not to mention a uniform kink idea, and something in an alley)
yeah, *what* pure virginal mind huh?
ohhh. poking out eyes! I almost forgot that little bit of subtext. haha Oedipus Rex. Not I've got a thinky dilemma. how can something be removed if it didn't exist in the first place?
It's the perfect family . . . where the intelligent wife gives up her career and chances of really making something of her life *to serve her husband at dinner while he sits on his judgmental platitude spouting ass. He probably wouldn't have let Davis come over because he's a foster kid. It's his fault Clark and Lex never got it on.*
This might just be my favorite new quote of yours. And I've never even seen Jonathan, other than Eternal, but if his ass does that, count me out. freakytimes! makes me almost ship Martha/notsosaint!Lionel.
And oh yeah Jimmy's all suicidal in Beast because Davis took Chloe from him? LIke that's mentally stable. The dumbass is too wacked to remember he divorced her. He so shoulda flipped it and attacked Davis. It would have been awesome.
I was waiting for that with baited breath. I would've gotten popcorn. He was so bipolar there. first he's like Chloe bye! you fuBU%#*&! and then he's all like YOU DESTROYED MY WIFELIFE, you BEASSSTTT!! yeah. racked out and bipolar. Doomvis is totally jerking his chain right now.
Plastique: remind me to read the subtext, it adds a whole other dimension to things. Perhaps Davis's 'peeping Tom' comment was *for REALS*(Clark was missing Lex *that* much, not that he needed too much motivation).
I can just imagine that. Zod: KNEEL before ZOD to the entire wedding party in Chloe's wedding to the *right* guy. gigglesnort Oh yeah, and Gabe cocking his shotgun (okay, this is so an in joke for 'villain of the story')
Seriously, though, your ZOd is CRREEEPPPYY, just the way I like im.
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