Failsday Challenge Entry 8/8

[femvamp]

Title: I Never Promised You a Happy Ending 8/8
Author: Femvamp
Disclaimer: Smallville sucks doody. Yes I said it. “doody.” I don’t own the doody.
Note: This is in response to the Smallville Failsday Challenge.
Note: My idea is to change the events of Beast………..to this.
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Comments

[chlavis333]

Oh, so Davis really is dead. Well, it is better that he died this way then on the show. And I'm glad that Chloe loved him and was actually tired of living her life for everyone else. I like her as a hero but it's so frustrating that she has to suffer so much for it and she can't have a life of her own. She's always doing everything for everyone else. So I really like her leaving town and trying to find her own life.

I don't like the whole Jimmy Henry thing I think it's pretty lame to name your kids basically the same name. And although Jimmy had been annoying and frustrating he was still Jimmy Olsen to me.

I liked your ending w/ Lois now that's intriguing.

I think you should write a sequel maybe just on that alone would be really intersting. And I knew all of Tess' plottings was because she loved Clark and wanted them to role the world together. HeeHee. IDK what kind of crazy AU that is but it looks intruging and it would be really funny for Lois to interact w/Kal in a world like this.

And as for Clark Kent is dead I didn't like that part on the show, especially since he came to that conclusion by Davis' horrible ending.

[femvamp]

I honestly wasn't intending to include Jimmy in the story as much of anything (Plus I also like Jimmy as Jimmy) but I finally decided to at least try to come up with some sort of explanation that even kind of made sense. (Parents do weird things to their kids).

This really was supposed to be much shorter and only a Clark/Chloe/Davis story but somewhere along the line other characters snuck and I decided to stay somewhat true to the Smallville storyline. (at least the parts that made sense)