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Ficlet: Lies and Consequences

Mar 01, 2007 21:06

Title: Lies and Consequences
Rating: G
Pairing: Unhappy Lexana, shades of Clex
Spoilers: Through S6 Falllout.
Summary: Alternative ending to Fallout wherein Lex makes a difficult decision.
Word count: 574

( Lex being a meanie under the cut. )

Comments 13

cinderella81 March 2 2007, 04:55:35 UTC

*loves*

Totally awesome!!

ladydreamer March 2 2007, 05:01:43 UTC

Lol. Thanks. Yeah, I wish that had happened whether they got back together or not. Or, not had Lana acting like a senseless twit to begin with.

maigie2010 March 2 2007, 05:18:36 UTC

Lex and Lana split - tell me this will happen! I so felt the line you wrote about her wrinkling her nose. I think it's very unnattractive also. I love the last line. Great ficcie.

ladydreamer March 2 2007, 05:36:38 UTC

Thank you. :D

velvetandlace March 2 2007, 22:21:57 UTC

While this was nice enough and moved at a quick narrative pace (although, really, the last two paragraphs read like an introduction), this, well, bored me, and I found the dialogue flat and unengaging. Sorry! :(

acampbell March 3 2007, 03:45:18 UTC

Yeah!!! It's so GOOD to see Lana called on some of her crap!

ladydreamer March 3 2007, 04:07:08 UTC

They have to have one character around to tell her off, for Zod's sake!

supercaptain182 March 3 2007, 04:47:15 UTC

Damn!

That was powerful. The last line was like a punch to the gut and it was absolutely Lex.

ladydreamer March 3 2007, 05:21:44 UTC

Thank you very much. ♥