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One Last Adventure Pt2 (Guy/Marian)

Jun 28, 2008 23:15

So, where's Guy been and what's he been doing these past few years?

Part 2

He stood at the back door of his home leaning casually against the doorframe arms folded across his chest, his usual stance. A solitary figure gazing out seemingly lost in thought. He needed a moment's peace at the end of yet another long, busy day. It was not Sir Guy of ( Read more... )

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bookishy June 29 2008, 14:40:42 UTC

I'm really loving this so far. Your world is so intricately detailed, and you've taken the characters to such an interesting place.

Really liked this paragraph--seems perfectly in voice. And aw! Alan!

Guy was shocked when a message made it's way to him anonymously that he should seriously consider leaving Nottingham without delay. Even if the beginning of the message had not read, "I'm not trying to be funny, but...", he would have known his former protege was behind the message. It could be that Alan felt some small amount of loyalty to Guy or possibly guilt over his defection back into Robin's gang. Who knows why he did it, Guy was grateful nonetheless, took the warning seriously, and made a speedy departure in the dead of night. He heard later about the Sheriff's execution and knew he had made a narrow escape. Would he miss the Sheriff? A clue...No.

I can't wait for more!

suzyq_123 June 29 2008, 16:17:01 UTC

Thanks! It was funny to me that not long after I had written that part and posted it elsewhere, Richard made the comment about how the Sheriff could trust him Mon., Wed., & Fri, but on Tues. & Thurs., Guy dreamed of the day when he wouldn't have to put up with the Sheriff. I'm glad I got rid of the Sheriff early on, but I kinda miss being able to write some funny things for him too.

bookishy June 29 2008, 16:42:10 UTC

Too bad Marian talked to him about killing the Sheriff on a Friday :(

My fic was the same way--the bad part about killing the Sheriff is that you miss writing all of his witticisms!

suzyq_123 June 29 2008, 16:45:46 UTC

LOL! I hadn't thought about Marian choosing the wrong day to get Guy to off the Sheriff. By the way, I love your fic too...forgot to say that. I'm so inept at this LJ stuff still.

bookishy June 29 2008, 16:50:32 UTC

Thanks! And you're not inept at all! It does take a little time to get used to. And then once you do. . . . you're, you know, obsessed.

Maybe I should change the title of my fic to "If Marian had talked to Guy on Thursday." :)

suzyq_123 June 29 2008, 16:57:55 UTC

Personally, I'm wondering about Saturday and Sunday...*insert dirty thoughts here*

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