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suzvoy

New ATWT Fic: For The Wheel's Still in Spin, 27/?

Jan 28, 2011 20:54

For The Wheel's Still in Spin
by Suz

Previous parts can be found here.

Feedback would be appreciated :)

( For The Wheel's Still in Spin, Part 27 )

Comments 62

cherimola January 28 2011, 21:20:48 UTC

Sighhh.

Three favorite sentences:

Dr Oliver, however? He is definitely a man."
That wasn't icky at all.
Luke shifted in place. "Mom..." It was disturbing how easily Luke could sound like a little kid.

And logic would indeed dictate Noah’s junk-less-ness.

And I’m seriously considering making a trip in the vague direction of Louisville.

vintagelamb January 28 2011, 21:37:26 UTC

Wow...you're all caught up! Fabulous, isn't it?

cherimola January 28 2011, 23:44:41 UTC

After I wrap up my trip to Louisville I'm gonna swing by this Oakdale and buy some property.

vintagelamb January 29 2011, 00:13:09 UTC

Road trip! I'm in. The 2 Lisas seeing the sights.

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nancygrew January 28 2011, 21:47:13 UTC

Another great chapter. Love that your Lily is only concerned with Luke's happiness. Love how Lucinda isn't even in this chapter but that her presence is felt.

Funny line that highlights Reid's cynicism >> Reid couldn't help but wonder exactly what Noah had 'explained' and if it matched anyone's version of reality

Such a great character line that really explains how Luke sees himself >>> "Because all those times before," Luke replied firmly, "I wanted to get back together. Anything was better than being alone. The abandoned drunk."

suzvoy January 29 2011, 16:15:56 UTC

Love that your Lily is only concerned with Luke's happiness. Love how Lucinda isn't even in this chapter but that her presence is felt.

Thank you so much!

pabwecg January 28 2011, 22:07:56 UTC

Loved this chapter...as usual.

Immediately moving, he walked as quickly as he could towards the bathroom without actually breaking out into a run. God, so Luke.

Wet was another good look on him. Yes...

Reid smiled at him brightly just to irritate him perfect.

God, I hope WE don't have to wait 17 days...

suzvoy January 29 2011, 16:16:14 UTC

I doubt you will ;)

marsabi January 28 2011, 22:08:12 UTC

Yes Reid is a man- the man - LOL
And I wonder if they can last 18 days!
Good chapter...love this story !

suzvoy January 29 2011, 16:16:28 UTC

Thank you so much!

theshahofblah January 28 2011, 22:38:08 UTC

Darling. How I love thee, let me count the ways.... ;)

1. 'How do I make you feel?' It made me feel all fuzzy and nostalgic to see this epic question in here.

2. Loved Reid waking up to a convo he seriously needed to eavesdrop on unintentionally.

3. Reid da man vs Noah the boy. The boy is history, it's time for the real thing baby.

4. Loved the showering separately. It was so Luke to rush in there and emerge like some delectable little morsel.

5. So, we've got a deadline now. Wonder how and if they'll last that long......

theshahofblah January 29 2011, 08:47:17 UTC

I meant countdown instead of deadline actually. :D

suzvoy January 29 2011, 16:17:05 UTC

1. 'How do I make you feel?' It made me feel all fuzzy and nostalgic to see this epic question in here

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