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Jul 26, 2007 09:43

Title: Responsibility ( Read more... )

mercy/adam, fanfic, warren/kyle, het, mercy thompson, fanfiction, pg-13, mercy/sam

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kiyoshi_chan July 26 2007, 16:44:43 UTC
I don't exactly get what she chose. Did she choose neither? I don't get it. x_x;;; Sorry, I'm dumb.

Um, you had a "make due" when it's meant to be "make do" somewhere near the beginning - at least the first third, when they're about to have a meeting and Darryl is freaking.

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suyari July 26 2007, 17:27:25 UTC
Thanks I hadn't noticed.

And Mercy chose to bolt instead of answering. She may or may not have had help too.

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kiyoshi_chan July 26 2007, 18:40:24 UTC
Ah, that would explain the running comment. :/ I can certainly see why she chose that.

Oooo, from Bran?

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suyari July 26 2007, 20:10:40 UTC
;p

I like to believe so.

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kiyoshi_chan July 27 2007, 11:42:53 UTC
Poor everybody. :(

I love how you wrote Adam's pack's reaction though. Darryl most certainly would be pro-Adam. :P

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suyari July 27 2007, 13:21:37 UTC
Though he may be anti-Mercy (as Alpha Mate) a bit, seeing as Mercy's what she is, he strikes me as definitely rooting for Adam, should things turn out that way. Simply because it's Adam.

Thanks.

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