Why their Dinner Burned *Final Chapter*

Jan 29, 2009 12:05

Title: Why their Dinner Burned?
Author: Stephie
Chapters: 6 of 6
Pairings: Inoobu, Takayama, Arijima, Hikato, and Chiitaro
Rating: NC-17
Genre: General to Smut
Warnings: Adult Content
Summary: Since that night that Inoo had spent at Yabu’s house and found out Yabu’s secret, their relationship had changed. Yabu goes to Takaki for help and Inoo went ( Read more... )

fanfiction: multi-chapter, story: he needs to know: trilogy, hsj: nakajima yuto, hsj: inoo kei, hsj: yabu kota, hsj: arioka daiki, hsj: takaki yuya, hsj: yaotome hikaru

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suteii January 30 2009, 00:50:52 UTC
lol there is... don't worry... can't wait to see what you think

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suteii January 30 2009, 19:00:29 UTC
Lol I hope you get back to school on time! I'm glad you enjoyed the smut and that you think it's amazing... me I'm still not sure but if everyone says so it must be true. *smacks self for conforming* lol.

I like how you added you in there. that was amusing... thanks for reading... again i hope you got back to school on time.

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chibilover14 January 30 2009, 00:09:52 UTC
OWO
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOVED IIIIIIT!!! XDDDDDDDDD *FLAAAAAAAILS ALL OVER, RUNNING AROUND* XDDD

OH MY FREAKING GOD. XDDD I HAD THE SAME REACTION AS TAKAKI, DAIKI, AND HIKARU! XDDDDDDDD

So that's what happened in between. xDD Heehee~ Awesome job on this!!! xD

I think I need to go find Yama-chan.”

“No!” Yabu stopped him. “Let him sleep!”

“But, please, this isn’t going to take care of itself” Takaki argued.LMAOOOO!!! xDDD I love how you imply stuff without actually saying what it ish. xDDD Pfft, I think Takaki will still go and find Yama-chan. xDDD ( ... )

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suteii January 30 2009, 00:56:42 UTC
*Hugs back, and attempts to calm you down* I'm glad you like it.

Implying things is fun... it gets people to come to their own conclusions.

The extra part will be explained in the sequel...don't worry. Again implying things and drawing your own conclusions

I actually had fun writing the smut, and for my first time doing that kind of writing i'd say it isn't bad. What are you talking about you could never write like that? You write it soooooo well!

Thanks for reading and commenting...I'll look forward to your comments on the sequel

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tokidoki_sama January 30 2009, 00:42:22 UTC
Uwah~~~ the end! *tears up* I loved this fic... sad to see it end...

This wasn't a fail! And I agree with Dai-chan...hehe..XD And oh dear... what did Yuto do? ... I'm not going to say anything for fear of being wrong and looking stupid... (as if I don't do that well enough by myself...XD)

This fic was win from start to finish and I loved it!!! Don't be surprised if I reread it a few times... :)

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suteii January 30 2009, 01:01:36 UTC
Yeah it's over *tears* but the sequel should make you happy right?

I'm glad you think it isn't a fail, I actually had a lot of fun writing it. For now I will let you draw your own conclusions as too what Arijima did, until the sequel at least when it gets explained. lol something to look forward too right?

Thanks as always for reading and commenting, Don't be surprised if I re-read your own fics over, they are good aswell. So read mine as much as you want. I look forward to your comments on the sequel.

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suteii January 30 2009, 03:53:21 UTC
Wow incoherency much? I'm glad everything was cleared up for you, Yes he's at the top, he needs to teach Yabumama a lesson. I don't know are they together? one night does not make someone with another person, does it?

What would your reaction be if your best friends told you a story like that? Wouldn't it be similar? I know mine is... it's already happened to me so I know.

Yuto came from... his room......I'll leave the naughty-ness to your brain, I think you can come up with a conclusion.

I'm glad you think I ended it perfectly but don't forget there is a sequel! thank-you for thinking it's awesome, your comments on it truly made me smile everytime, as always thank-you for reading and commenting

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suteii January 30 2009, 05:05:48 UTC
Use your corrupted mind to the fullest! I know I do. lol yes of course they like each other, don't they state that in the previous chapters? It wouldn't be an Inoobu without the romantic interest.

Well I'm glad I can make you go kyaaa with each chapter and each fic, it makes me happy to hear that....sequel should be up soon....don't worry

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deathstring January 30 2009, 04:35:04 UTC
wah! i've been waiting for the last chappie! i didn't expect a smut but wah!! I love it! I cant stop reading and waiting chapters of it! well sorry for not commenting but now. I suddenly got an urge to comment because this chap gave me shivers because I really like it!

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suteii January 30 2009, 05:08:58 UTC
Hello. just one question: you didn't expect smut? *points to genre*

I'm glad the I gave you the need to comment on thhis chapter....thank-you for reading and commenting. Don't worry about not commenting before...at least you commented now right?

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suteii February 2 2009, 03:36:59 UTC
well that definately makes me happy.... and i understand... you had me confused for a minute there

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