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The Echoes That Surround You, Part 1

Jun 20, 2006 02:03

Title: The Echoes That Surround You, Part 1
Time: Post-BDM
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: Huge thanks to terimaru for super quick beta- luvs her!
Joss said in a commentary once that Jayne was a coward...I wanted to run with that for abit, if you squint you can see it referenced...
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paiger1218 June 20 2006, 11:54:43 UTC

awwwwwwwwww... this was very, very good...

ceslas June 20 2006, 12:45:53 UTC

*Yippee* She liked it! She liked it! *twirls happily*....

deadpoetwoffie June 20 2006, 15:16:45 UTC

wow. I really like this. I can't wait to see where you are going!! But, knowing you, it'll probably take a trip through angstville before too long! (It's an okay place to visit, just don't take up permanent residence!!) :)

ceslas June 20 2006, 18:07:25 UTC

*Whip head around looking over shoulder* Angstville? Nah....oh wait, you meant me, right...yes, Angstville is my home town it seems.
Thanks for the note! *Hugs* I really am a positive person, or rather my alter ego is...lol

xxwont_sayaword June 20 2006, 20:47:29 UTC

Oh, that was amazing. I love it when people explore Jayne because he's so my favorite. I always thought he had the potential to be seriously adorable - and this fic showed it. So thank you. You must write more. *demands this, pounds gavel on desk*

“Sure ya are, ya picked the name Jayne, right?” She replied in total innocence.

If you don't write more with him and Alley, maybe you can write about Jayne's name. *wiggles brows*

ceslas June 21 2006, 00:47:41 UTC

As you wish...there is more on the way, just had to get a canon question answered by "She Who Owns The Fishies"!

Thanks so much for the encouragement, it means alot!

terimaru June 21 2006, 06:16:02 UTC

She Who Owns The Fishies

SNORT! Cause that is funny!

You have an amazing gift for starting out, writing in a big damn circle, then arriving right back in the *exact* spot you needed to be. During that ride, you offer the reader a huge scope of backstory and character development. I like that. :-)

ceslas June 21 2006, 06:19:15 UTC

Then you will be pleased to know that there is a fic in the post to you soon (within the next half hour or so I think) that has lots of really tiny circles in it....lol

terimaru June 21 2006, 06:41:39 UTC

It's 2:00ish am. I'll look at it tomorrow - promise. Tiny circles...hmmm...sounds intriguing.

terimaru June 21 2006, 16:20:03 UTC

Just in case you didn't get my email - send that last part to me again. There was a problem with a virus from Japan and it ain't pretty.