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ceslas in sushi_fic

In the Name of a Child

Jun 18, 2006 16:27

Title: In the Name of a Child
Time: Very, very Post-BDM
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words.
Notes: Yet another prompt from another story. Thanks to hfleming8 for giving us Alley's name fic...here is Matthew's.

In The Name of a Child

Comments 22

deadpoetwoffie June 19 2006, 00:03:12 UTC

ok! that's it! no more sad, make me want to cry fic!!
This was beautiful.

ceslas June 19 2006, 00:05:21 UTC

That was sad? Right then...must work on that for next time ;). I am glad you thought it beautiful though.

deadpoetwoffie June 19 2006, 01:39:42 UTC

well, you said that Inara was dead.....
and Mal is all broody...
it was just a sad tone....

:(

but good....v. good

ceslas June 19 2006, 01:43:04 UTC

I said Inara was dead? Where? When? Oh no, that would be a huge error on my part- she can't die,, many more years of fighting with and making up after with Mal...oh dear...hurries back to reread....

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browncoat_2x2 June 19 2006, 00:27:27 UTC

Oooh, lots of powerful scenes in here... Mal and Mathew in Serenity Valley, sitting side by side... Inara's difficult delivery! eeep! poor Inara! (I may have a plot bunny there too..hmmm)

And this of course: It comes from love son. Love. Perfect...

Very nice!

ceslas June 19 2006, 01:41:18 UTC

Thanks! Praise from one of my favorite writers is so squee inducing!I would love for that plot bunny to grow and romp freely under your guidance!
*Hugs*

browncoat_2x2 June 19 2006, 20:31:54 UTC

It might! It's stewin' in the brainpan right now... and I've got another that's cookin up... so.. we'll see. Should have something Sushi!Verse related soon!

paiger1218 June 19 2006, 02:59:59 UTC

This was beautiful. I love the picture you paint of Matthew being the image of Mal... it tears at my heartstrings. This was incredibly well done... keep up the great work!

ceslas June 19 2006, 03:03:12 UTC

*Happy dance!*
Thanks for the positive note...I could just see the two of them sitting there together, bookends kinda. *Squeee* Gotta have someone in the 'Verse to carry on dong ma? Why not Mal's son?

terimaru June 19 2006, 04:42:13 UTC

This was so touching and very powerful. So glad to know that Mal and Inara live to have grown children. And going back to Serenity Valley, and the memorial, that is all so poignant.

You did a lovely job with this. I love how you tied it up so well.

Thank you! What a great addition to our 'verse.

ceslas June 19 2006, 04:45:59 UTC

Squeee! *Hugs to Terimaru* This was your baby to begin with (Sushi and Sashimi) I just get to play in the pool sometimes! In my vision, Mal and Inara live a long time with lots of angst and crisis and close calls...but they are together at the end as a OTP should be...imho that it.

*Still squeeing over praise!*

isha_libran June 19 2006, 08:08:06 UTC

Oh, this was lovely.

The idea of Mal finally coming full circle, visiting Serenity Valley with his son, talking to him about faith...wonderful.

And I loved the last line.

Thanks for sharing! =)

ceslas June 19 2006, 13:42:11 UTC

*Hugs* Thanks! It was a nice circle in my mind as well. I was prompted to it by a comment Zoe made in another fic about it being Mal's place to tell his son about the war...soooo....Memorial Day always gives me goose bumps, and with the Normandy memorials in mind, I got the plot bunny to offer me some things.