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May 30, 2008 18:21



“You look …really cute when smiling” Changmin suddenly commented.

“Really?” he shyly responded.

Changmin sweetly smiled at the boy “What is your name? And I still don’t know how you knew my name”

Junsu froze. How am I supposed to tell you that we’d met before but you just simply forgot me?  “It’s … it’s…Junsu” his voice cracked.
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susgirl May 30 2008, 09:32:49 UTC
*is waiting* you are so fast XDXDXD

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susgirl May 30 2008, 11:52:25 UTC
Awwwww, is he okay now??? *hands medicine*

Thanks alot for what you said. I DO love every single words of your comment <333 it meant a lot to me since i knew the last paragraph is not good T__T i even thought of deleting it but yeah... its still my child XDXDD i cant just get rid of it like that :p

*huggles* ♥♥♥

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zhe01 May 30 2008, 10:52:00 UTC
Ah.. XD

I'm not a great fan of how the last paragraph went, but in general, ♥! :)

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susgirl May 30 2008, 10:58:33 UTC
^^ thanks for commenting... I never wrote sth like that before so.... i knew its weird T___T

thanks for criticism, i;ll try harder next time

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junsu_hyung May 30 2008, 23:29:59 UTC
Gah! All the drama! Changmin missing Junsu, Junsu missing Changmin, and then the father comes back!
But... gah! The reunion was so sad! I loved it! Yes, rain scenes are a win in my book.
kdjfa;lksdjfalksjdfklajsdlfh;a! MinSu! ♥♥♥

I love it! You're amazing! *huggles*

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susgirl June 1 2008, 12:02:52 UTC
XDXDXD hellu, thanks alot... I just realized that my fic is a little bit sad outside minsu's love XDXDXD but its okay right?
I love rain scenes too. should have focused on it a little bit more *gets whacked*. Lets save it for the next time ^^ Junsu will sing rainy night under the rain, how is it??? LMAO

Thanks for your love *huggles*

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junsu_hyung June 2 2008, 01:25:03 UTC
XD I like angst though. It's awesome!
"Rainy Night" would be amazing! I'd love it! But that is such an agnst song... How would you work it in?

No problem! *huggles*

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susgirl June 2 2008, 03:15:44 UTC
nah, i was just thinking about putting that song in the next fic XDXDXDXD ....

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ttaejoong_hyuk May 30 2008, 23:32:15 UTC
aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! the minsu was soooo sweet!!!! wahahaha, i don't like you, i love you..awwww!!!! and changmin went back for junsu!!! aaahhhh, so sweet....hope junsu can solve his family problems....and changmin will help him? XDDD aaahhh, minsu is luv!!! XDDD

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susgirl June 1 2008, 12:06:13 UTC
LOL, you scared me with the part "i dont like you" *rolling* j/k

I <3 U X2 ♥♥♥♥

Changmin is always his rescuer, isnt he?
Thanks for supporting ^^v

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ttaejoong_hyuk June 2 2008, 05:29:23 UTC
XDDD...never! i would never!!! especially not to someone who also has a minsu interest!!! XDDD
<33333333 ^_^
yes, his very handsome rescuer...*sighs dreamily at minsu scene...XDDD*

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susgirl June 2 2008, 09:49:57 UTC
haha you are cute *huggles*

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coke_pie221 May 31 2008, 00:16:55 UTC
omg~ this is so Sweet!! XD
although i'm more of a yoosu fan, this really touched me~
i'm so glad minnie went back for su!
can't wait fore more~

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susgirl June 1 2008, 12:11:21 UTC
awwie, me 2 im a loyal yoosu and yunjae fan ^^ cant believe my first fic is about minsu. but im actually in love with minsu after writing this :p

Thanks alot for commenting :) I finished the last part just 5 mins ago >__< will update in 2 days hopefully

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coke_pie221 June 2 2008, 03:21:19 UTC
oh i really hope so~
i can't wait to read more XD

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