FANFIC | The Wiser Man

[kitoky]

Title: The Wiser Man
Author: Kitoky
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian
Characters/Pairings: Edmund, Susan, Caspian; Susan/Caspian
Rating: K+
Summary: Caspian had never been the wisest man.
Author's Note: Written for casue100  (will be cross-posted there), prompt set: 50/50. This is for #51: Wisdom. Unbeta'd.
Disclaimer: I own basically nothing. CS Lewis

Comments

[amethyststeam]

OMG, LOVEITLOVEITLOVE. <333333333333333333333

-takes a deep breath to sustain glee so she can form a coherent response-

I love the tension at the beginning of the piece, and especially Caspian's cluelessness when it came to fixing the situation. And I was wondering exactly what Caspian had done to make Susan in almost tears (when he seemed so innocent and not angry or anything) when the toffees came up...and I laughed. (But understood it even more when I realized that Susan was pregnant; which makes the whole scenario make a whole lot more sense. 8D)

I especially love the line "So, so bad" and the two paragraphs that followed. One of the best lines would have to be:

He wasn’t going to be the one begging for forgiveness, wasn’t going to be the one ordered to sleep outside on the settee, and wasn’t the one that was going to deal with the sensitive feelings of his expecting Queen.

XDDD I can totally see Edmund manipulating Caspian, especially when Edmund himself won't get in trouble for it. (And I love Edmund in Susan/Caspian fics,

[kitoky]

I was glad when you told me that I could mix the prompts from the 100 set with the 50/50 because I had been eyeing the 'Wisdom' prompt for quite some time but it was in the 100 set. :p

YAY! Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as you did. I hadn't expected such a long comment but the fact that you gave one makes me squee with joy and happiness. :D <3 <3 <3

I write too many Susan is pregnant fics. Wishful thinking. -sigh-

You're win, btw.

[amethyststeam]

Oh and I added a username tag (kitoky) for you at casue100, for when you post there. :)

[kitoky]

Yay! =D Thanks, amethyst! :D You win at life.

[amethyststeam]

*bows*

[kitoky]

=] Thanks for reading.

[blackcathollow]

aww that is sooo adorable. Its funny how he knows that edmund is doing something very very wrong and when hes caught in the act he shrinks to the floor as if hes the most horrid person ever. But one should know not to touch food especially a pregnant woman's food.

More susan pregnancy fics would be good... or suspain babies!!

(AMAZING per usual)

[kitoky]

Isn't that just --Caspian-- though? "It was Edmund's fault but I'll take the blame". It's so... oh, Caspian. [melts]

Thanks for reading! :D

[illuxtris]

I say the best Caspian/Susan fics always have Edmund on them. BECAUSE EDMUND IS LOVE.

[kitoky]

You are so right. Edmund. <3 Argh. I've been fangirling and it's just... [flail]

Thanks for reading!