Comments | susancaspian: Suspicion

space_cpt_sarah in susancaspian

Suspicion

Jan 04, 2009 17:54

Title: Suspicion
Characters/Pairing: Caspian, Susan, Lucy, Edmund. Susan/Caspian
Rating: K+
Summary: Caspian is a light sleeper. He has to be. Which is why he is completely mortified to wake one morning to find flowers in his hair.
Disclaimer: I'm obviously not C.S. Lewis. ...or am I? (no.)
Notes: Made for pure cuteness. First time testing the waters of ( Read more... )

fanfiction: catch-all, author: space_cpt_sarah, rating: k+

Comments 20

heloula January 5 2009, 03:17:00 UTC

beautiful and very sweet. did good to my soul :D

I loved it :D Well done.

space_cpt_sarah January 5 2009, 03:53:58 UTC

Thank you. :3 I love feeding other people's souls.

heloula January 5 2009, 06:54:37 UTC

You're welcome. I know the feeling.

And, seriously, hands down to you! First piece in the fandom and you nail it? that's just fantastic. Will there be more?

kitoky January 5 2009, 06:59:53 UTC

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE.

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kitoky January 5 2009, 03:33:21 UTC

Total win. This is an excellent for your first Narnia piece and how cute was that ?? Oh my gosh. The beginning narration was a great set up for Caspian's attitude and the ending.

It's the flowers, Caspian. Trust in the flowers.

My favorite line has got to be: He wants to refuse her request, on a number of grounds, pure manliness being the most prominent.

LOL! Pure "manliness".

space_cpt_sarah January 5 2009, 03:56:11 UTC

Thank you~! :3 I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lol yes, Caspian is very sensitive about his manliness. I think it's because of his girlish hair. :P

stephie_nhbg January 5 2009, 05:29:04 UTC

Rofl, this is so rediculously cute, that it should be illegal. I loved it! :)

space_cpt_sarah January 5 2009, 06:10:06 UTC

lol thanks! I love your icon, by the way. :3 Super cute.

stephie_nhbg January 5 2009, 08:18:57 UTC

Rofl, I know right. :) and your's is full of win as well, just so you know. :)

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space_cpt_sarah January 6 2009, 02:39:14 UTC

I thought about that, but to me, it always seemed like Caspian was more shocked that his uncle was going to have him down right assassinated, just like that, not really that his uncle had it in for him. While he may not have originally been so paranoid, I think after all the shock he went through he certainly would have become so.

Thank you for you feedback! :3

shadesofsienna January 5 2009, 07:41:51 UTC

I love this. Memming this to read again on a rainy day. ♥