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[kitoky]

Title - Between the Summer and the Winter
Author - Kitoky
Fandom - Narnia
Characters/Pairings - Lucy; Susan/Caspian
Rating - K+
Summary - It seemed, Susan thought, Narnia was not so fond of winter after the presence of the White Witch.
Disclaimer - I own nothing. Not even my imagination which was programmed into me by aliens when they operated! Narnia

Comments

[maaike_fluffy]

And you think this 'sucks majoy eggnog'? ;) No, this was exactly what I was hoping for when I was writing the prompt.

I love the part between Susan and the 5-year-old Lucy. I can so totally picture her going all wide-eyes and happy about magic in England. Beautiful image....

Thanks for writing!

[kitoky]

I actually had a different idea for a response but that was scratched and shoved into the folder of doom. I'm surprised that I got this little bit together because once I get an idea for something I have a hard time thinking of it a different way.

I was debating about the whole Susan telling Lu about 'magic' thing, because we know our Su, she's the logical sort. But I ended up writing in about how Su's being 'logical' about not telling a five year old something they may not understand.

Thanks for reading! =]

[kitoky]

Awww. Fantasia! Got to pull that out to watch again, love that movie. :D I like the similar imagery there.

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

[tinaababy]

You my dear are good at being descriptive. And this line just got to me.

Here, Susan laid her head in the crook of Caspian’s neck, frost thrives between the summer and the winter. IDK why but I just really like it!

[kitoky]

That ending line just kind of popped up as I wrote it, so I'm glad it fits well.

Thanks for reading! :]