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Drabble Challenge Entry #16

Sep 28, 2008 17:28

Title: Scenes in a Park
Rating: PG
Summary: Susan contemplates a leaf and various others enjoying the autumn scenery in Hyde Park.
A/N: So this entry doesn't directly mention Caspian or their relationship but it eludes to it in very creative and subtle ways. *or at least I would like to think so ;-D*

( Life is like that. )

author: lovesrogue36, rating: pg, fanfiction: weekly drabble challenge, weekly challenge #16: autumn

Comments 3

sonata_art September 29 2008, 12:32:17 UTC

Oh...ouch.

maaike_fluffy September 29 2008, 16:05:59 UTC

Such a nice, peaceful picture... and then that last line... almost like a gut punch. :S Very well done. Makes the scene so very powerful...

Great writing!

lovesrogue36 September 29 2008, 16:32:29 UTC

Thanks so much - it was originally just supposed to be about the leaf but it escalated and she was already wearing black...