*gloats*
Hell yes.
I've finally finished another letter, this one from Integral to Libretta, the minute I realized that by simply switching my inteded recipient from Adrienne to Libretta I could cut the insanely long letter into smaller parts and finally have a decent reason as to why Integral would be confiding all of this information all of my problems where solved.
I'm still not sure weather I'm going to have to write from Libretta to Integral *winces* or if I'll be able to keep the story line clear while showing only Integral's letters but either way it'll be easier then what I was trying to do before. I hope. Libretta would be hell to try and figure out enough to write...
I'm vaguely concerned over the romance, for it's hard to develop the romance when the communication is mostly taking place between third parties and not Integral and Adrienne but upon reflection several of my favorite books have the romance develop quitely and is practicly hidden among the plot so it feels all the more natural in the end, maybe this will happen *frowns*.
If I do write from Libretta's POV I'll have her mention Addrienne and have Integral ask questions or something.
Also I had the oportunity to see most of the second season of Atlantis for they were running all of them back to back on sci-fi. *beams at sci-fi* lovely, lovely people
Starting from the latest episode and working my way backwards.
Trinity was great for the Ronon story line but very painful for the Rodney story line. Personally I thought the pain came in the very end with that 'none of you can understand exactly what I'm doing here so you just have to trust me' line. I kept hoping though I knew the possibility was remote that Rodney would turn out right. *sniff* Poor darling Rodney.
Ronon side story was great because it gave me wonderful material for trying to figure out how he views leadership and leaders and thus how he views John and Atlantis. *hums in happiness* Obviously he expects a great deal so he is willing to give a great deal. This is supported by his willingness to follow direct orders. (the expecting a great deal comes from the killing his old leader cuz he's a coward scene) It makes sense that once he made up his mind that a leader was worthy he would be utterly willing to follow them to hell and back, at least until they proved dishonorable in his eyes. (I wonder if they'll have a scene in a future episode where he feels like maybe John has 'betrayed him' hmm.)
I have so many pretty Ronon thoughts and though I can not do them justice other people are not writing enough so I might be driven in desperation into cobbeling together some kind of coherent story from the random scribbles that have burst out of me in the past couple of days.
I liked Ronon in Runner as well, even though the acting was a little wince worthy for a couple of moments. Why had no one mentioned in their fic or in meta that his world was highly technologicly advanced?
He is hardly some kind of barbarian (did you see his spiffy uniform in the flashback?). Though he certainly looks the part now. Whieh drives me to reflect upon how he would react to, after spending seven years abandoning 'civilization' being thrust right back into it. Must be as much of a shock to be on Atlantis as it was to leave his home world, except this time there are all these witnesses in case he has a breakdown. I'm facinated.
Sheppard and Teyla are lovely. Truly lovely, pretty things.
I loved the way John's so proud of his promotion and I love Elizabeth for facing down all those military to get it for him. Intruder was in general a pretty cool episode what with all the flashbacks that gave us such a great taste of everyone's unique characters outside of Atlantis.
I also loved the way that the first news Rodney thought to tell Ford was Sheppard's promotion. Hehehehe.
Someone write John/Rodney/Ronon threesome damn it, with John on top. Not that I'm demanding or anything.
Oh, and Siege III was good. I don't see why people write Teyla and Rodney as on bad terms I felt like they are very good together, Teyla is more patient then most people and Rodney is much nicer to her then most people. That scene where Elizabeth oficially gives Rodney the day off and he lays down on the floor but when Tyela says 'and I'll be sure to tell all the Wraith in the city that you're not going to be hunting them...' he gets up and presumably goes of to hunt Wraith. Essentially he listens to Teyla over his own preferences and Elizabeth's permission which I thought was telling; he respects Teyla and is very affectionate towards her.
Oh, Atlantis, Oh my pretty. Why aren't people writing more fic? *cries* I'm not even that picky, any slash pairing dman it, any pairing... *licks*
Also, I was dumped. Pretty much for the first time. Was taken to sushi today by family and when I finally activated my cell phone again (I had lost it) discovered multiple messages from various interested guys so am not really heartbroken. Am a little sad if I think about it too much so am not. Instead am catching up on my writing. *pets self*
I've finally finished another letter, this one from Integral to Libretta, the minute I realized that by simply switching my inteded recipient from Adrienne to Libretta I could cut the insanely long letter into smaller parts and finally have a decent reason as to why Integral would be confiding all of this information all of my problems where solved.
I'm still not sure weather I'm going to have to write from Libretta to Integral *winces* or if I'll be able to keep the story line clear while showing only Integral's letters but either way it'll be easier then what I was trying to do before. I hope. Libretta would be hell to try and figure out enough to write...
I'm vaguely concerned over the romance, for it's hard to develop the romance when the communication is mostly taking place between third parties and not Integral and Adrienne but upon reflection several of my favorite books have the romance develop quitely and is practicly hidden among the plot so it feels all the more natural in the end, maybe this will happen *frowns*.
If I do write from Libretta's POV I'll have her mention Addrienne and have Integral ask questions or something.
Also I had the oportunity to see most of the second season of Atlantis for they were running all of them back to back on sci-fi. *beams at sci-fi* lovely, lovely people
Starting from the latest episode and working my way backwards.
Trinity was great for the Ronon story line but very painful for the Rodney story line. Personally I thought the pain came in the very end with that 'none of you can understand exactly what I'm doing here so you just have to trust me' line. I kept hoping though I knew the possibility was remote that Rodney would turn out right. *sniff* Poor darling Rodney.
Ronon side story was great because it gave me wonderful material for trying to figure out how he views leadership and leaders and thus how he views John and Atlantis. *hums in happiness* Obviously he expects a great deal so he is willing to give a great deal. This is supported by his willingness to follow direct orders. (the expecting a great deal comes from the killing his old leader cuz he's a coward scene) It makes sense that once he made up his mind that a leader was worthy he would be utterly willing to follow them to hell and back, at least until they proved dishonorable in his eyes. (I wonder if they'll have a scene in a future episode where he feels like maybe John has 'betrayed him' hmm.)
I have so many pretty Ronon thoughts and though I can not do them justice other people are not writing enough so I might be driven in desperation into cobbeling together some kind of coherent story from the random scribbles that have burst out of me in the past couple of days.
I liked Ronon in Runner as well, even though the acting was a little wince worthy for a couple of moments. Why had no one mentioned in their fic or in meta that his world was highly technologicly advanced?
He is hardly some kind of barbarian (did you see his spiffy uniform in the flashback?). Though he certainly looks the part now. Whieh drives me to reflect upon how he would react to, after spending seven years abandoning 'civilization' being thrust right back into it. Must be as much of a shock to be on Atlantis as it was to leave his home world, except this time there are all these witnesses in case he has a breakdown. I'm facinated.
Sheppard and Teyla are lovely. Truly lovely, pretty things.
I loved the way John's so proud of his promotion and I love Elizabeth for facing down all those military to get it for him. Intruder was in general a pretty cool episode what with all the flashbacks that gave us such a great taste of everyone's unique characters outside of Atlantis.
I also loved the way that the first news Rodney thought to tell Ford was Sheppard's promotion. Hehehehe.
Someone write John/Rodney/Ronon threesome damn it, with John on top. Not that I'm demanding or anything.
Oh, and Siege III was good. I don't see why people write Teyla and Rodney as on bad terms I felt like they are very good together, Teyla is more patient then most people and Rodney is much nicer to her then most people. That scene where Elizabeth oficially gives Rodney the day off and he lays down on the floor but when Tyela says 'and I'll be sure to tell all the Wraith in the city that you're not going to be hunting them...' he gets up and presumably goes of to hunt Wraith. Essentially he listens to Teyla over his own preferences and Elizabeth's permission which I thought was telling; he respects Teyla and is very affectionate towards her.
Oh, Atlantis, Oh my pretty. Why aren't people writing more fic? *cries* I'm not even that picky, any slash pairing dman it, any pairing... *licks*
Also, I was dumped. Pretty much for the first time. Was taken to sushi today by family and when I finally activated my cell phone again (I had lost it) discovered multiple messages from various interested guys so am not really heartbroken. Am a little sad if I think about it too much so am not. Instead am catching up on my writing. *pets self*