Jack/Teal'c-relief-ADULTsurreallisNovember 1 2007, 02:38:29 UTC
He kept trying to move too fast, kept trying to force it--force Teal'c--to end too soon. Teal'c wrapped one arm around his chest and then reached forward, bracing the other firmly against the wall.
"O'Neill," he rumbled against the man's ear. "Jack. Easy..."
Jack's hands were braced on the wall just under Teal'c's, and he crumpled slowly forward, until his forehead touched between his thumbs. He looked pained and worn, but not from the sex.
Teal'c pushed his hips forward, sliding deeper. O'Neill gave a whisper-thin groan and his fingers curled into fists.
Teal'c pulled him slowly back against his chest, elbow hooked under Jack's arm, fingers splayed over his collarbone. Jack resisted at first and then came back smoothly, body arching a bit as Teal'c thrust forward.
"Relent," Teal'c whispered. "It was not your fault."
There was a hoarse breath, a choked grunt, from O'Neill, and then his head came back to rest on Teal'c's shoulder, lips parted in agony and pleasure. Teal'c held him tightly, lips grazing his ear, then his neck. When he sank his teeth into Jack's shoulder, not cruelly, never that; Jack came, hard. Teal'c pressed him into the wall again, hips rocking forward until he was panting heavily and he slipped over that edge into heat and rushing blood.
"It was not your fault," he repeated, softly, as Jack sagged back against him.
Re: Jack/Teal'c-relief-ADULTsurreallisNovember 4 2007, 00:24:58 UTC
I've always sort of felt like Jack could let go with Teal'c in a way he couldn't with the others. Because T would understand him on a level that would be impossible for the others.
Re: Jack/Teal'c-relief-ADULTdknightshadeNovember 4 2007, 04:58:32 UTC
That would be excellent if it caught on more. I'm trying to write something for the effort here, but my teamficathon really needs to be in a better place before I can do that. :-/
"O'Neill," he rumbled against the man's ear. "Jack. Easy..."
Jack's hands were braced on the wall just under Teal'c's, and he crumpled slowly forward, until his forehead touched between his thumbs. He looked pained and worn, but not from the sex.
Teal'c pushed his hips forward, sliding deeper. O'Neill gave a whisper-thin groan and his fingers curled into fists.
Teal'c pulled him slowly back against his chest, elbow hooked under Jack's arm, fingers splayed over his collarbone. Jack resisted at first and then came back smoothly, body arching a bit as Teal'c thrust forward.
"Relent," Teal'c whispered. "It was not your fault."
There was a hoarse breath, a choked grunt, from O'Neill, and then his head came back to rest on Teal'c's shoulder, lips parted in agony and pleasure. Teal'c held him tightly, lips grazing his ear, then his neck. When he sank his teeth into Jack's shoulder, not cruelly, never that; Jack came, hard. Teal'c pressed him into the wall again, hips rocking forward until he was panting heavily and he slipped over that edge into heat and rushing blood.
"It was not your fault," he repeated, softly, as Jack sagged back against him.
"Okay," Jack answered, finally, relenting.
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I love the understanding and dynamic and pushing between these two.
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Oooh now this was excellent.
Definitely a slash pairing that needs more love (and fic!)
I love that you manage to convey so much about them in such a short piece!
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